Winter Kills

I want snow so bad now...lol

i love the depiction of winter that comes rushing through
with creeping cold
blankets of grey i could snuggle up in
shivers and the smell of death.
the death part makes me think of the movie "Alive" about the soccer team becoming cannibals.

awesome write mel44

Thanks Samael for the read and response.  I just want to curl up in bed and hibernate until spring! lol

i want to make a blanket fort now...


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I love this poem! I like how you mention winter as a force but also touch on how still and dead it is, very cool way to describe it.

Thank you very much Logan. So glad you enjoyed it. Your response is much appreciated 😊

98 in Adelaide today lol...love the imagery in this beautiful poem.
Cheers...Harry

Thank you Harry for taking the time to read and respond and thanks for rubbing it in with your fab temperature 😂. Where is Adelaide? Can I just say Jealous? Lol

Haha...Adelaide is the capital city of South Australia Mel.

Ah. 😂Good to know!

Excellent way to define the season!
Nice to see u spill again sweetie :)

Hello lovely😊 Thank you, as always, for your feedback. Yes it has been a bit! Still adjusting to winter in the UK. Lol. Much love dear.

Yes winter sometimes rushes in, or comes slowly but surely as death can come from strangulation. Easier poem to understand having just had a weekend bout of heavy snow and ice here in England.

Agreed! This past weekend was quite brutal! Thank you for read and response lovely. Stay warm😊

I’m freezing my ass off now!

Hmmm an unexpected consequence... lol  Thanks for the read:)

I really enjoyed it thank you lol

Makes us think of a cabin in the mountains, freezing until the fire starts roaring. Tight piece

Thank you so much! A lovely fire always warms the soul:)