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Whiskey Deep
i wonder what draws me to you
a man that isn't mine
your soul tastes of whiskey
you burn all the way down
to my nether regions
i ache for you
feel your phantom touch
upon my flesh
this is nonsense
i've sipped your essence
dined on your masculine form
& i'm left starved for more
i want you to dominate me
tear my panties off
ravage my sex holes
as you pump into me
all of your rage
no vanilla lady
dark chocolate sex
running with the pack
late night
neon lights on
kind of rough fuck
do me like i crave it
come at me hard
or not at all
i've seen you
in the hours you need me
pent up & angry
hungry for red meat
to sink your teeth in
i promise i'll only scream a little
while you fuck me from behind
biting down
as you work my rim
then plunge into my depths
my whiskey no chaser man
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Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 3:09pm
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13th Nov 2017 3:16pm
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13th Nov 2017 4:35pm
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13th Nov 2017 6:31pm
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13th Nov 2017 6:53pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 5:00pm
Straight up solid wall of heat here. I love the whiskey analogy. Bracing with a burn. I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
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Re: Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 6:32pm
thank you lovely one for feeling the passion with me today..
love you lady..
Crim
love you lady..
Crim
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13th Nov 2017 6:32pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 6:18pm
mmm mm mmm
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13th Nov 2017 6:33pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 6:53pm
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13th Nov 2017 6:54pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 7:04pm
Liked the way you put this together with the whiskey metaphor.
Good old straight up shots, hold the ice, wantin' nothin' to cool this ride down.
Though I prefer sweet Southern Comfort, I still enjoy a little 180 proof at times. :-)))
Nice penning my Lady.
Good old straight up shots, hold the ice, wantin' nothin' to cool this ride down.
Though I prefer sweet Southern Comfort, I still enjoy a little 180 proof at times. :-)))
Nice penning my Lady.
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Re: Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 7:26pm
thank you beautiful Teri
yes I love man straight up
the metaphor came from there
so happy you enjoyed :)
love Crim
yes I love man straight up
the metaphor came from there
so happy you enjoyed :)
love Crim
Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 7:51pm
Wow! I read "My Voice" and now "Whiskey Deep". Maybe two sides of the same Crim? Just goes to show how versatile you really are. Cheers to you Lady!
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Re: Re. Whiskey Deep
13th Nov 2017 7:58pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow yeah different sides of Crim happy you see me as versatile :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. Whiskey Deep
Anonymous
13th Nov 2017 7:56pm
Holy Holy . Time for a mid afternoon drink;-)
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13th Nov 2017 7:59pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
14th Nov 2017 1:29am
OMFG...that pic. Is insane enough but ssshhhiiittt...ur ink!? Ur ink!!??, yea I hate that bastard ur into LMAO... ok, maybe NOT hate, but I sure as hell feel jelly... lol
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Re: Re. Whiskey Deep
29th Nov 2017 5:51pm
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14th Nov 2017 8:34pm
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29th Nov 2017 5:51pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
15th Nov 2017 1:04am
Booooooooooooooooooom! - mic drop poem - loved it:-)))))))))))))))
perfect erotica as always :-)))))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))))
perfect erotica as always :-)))))))
Huge Hugs :-)))))))
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29th Nov 2017 5:52pm
Re. Whiskey Deep
Anonymous
18th Nov 2017 5:27am
Damn,...I all the sudden miss drinking whiskey again
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29th Nov 2017 5:53pm