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MIDNIGHT MONARCH (Haiku)
Born in pure mourning
a meager caterpillar
crawling up the tree
Bare in naked day
Hungry birds sing songs to me
wish to consume me
Vulnerable me
while inching up the tree
towards destiny
Nestled high at noon
I hide my old self away
A king in cocoon
Prepared soon to be
transformed into my true form
midnight monarch born
a meager caterpillar
crawling up the tree
Bare in naked day
Hungry birds sing songs to me
wish to consume me
Vulnerable me
while inching up the tree
towards destiny
Nestled high at noon
I hide my old self away
A king in cocoon
Prepared soon to be
transformed into my true form
midnight monarch born
Published 11th Nov 2017
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11th Nov 2017 9:49am
Artistically delicate and delightful write author! I enjoyed the veins of truth you weaved throughout so much that I could almost see the pulse of life throbbing ever so gently. Brava
11th Nov 2017 4:30pm
such a wonderful write. I love the metaphor of a human embracing change and becoming - this was a masterful write :-)
Huge LIKE! :-)
Huge LIKE! :-)
12th Nov 2017 3:02am
15th Nov 2017 5:45am
i APPRECIATE THE COMMENTS. I wrote this for Miss_sub and her competition AS NATURE INTENDED. It was to write a poem about a nature photograph that the poet captured. I submitted and failed. I congratulate the first and second place winners, nicely done. No third place for anyone, especially for a worm like me. I appreciate the opportunity
