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Stopping The Somber
Strawberry details
underpin sorbet flushes
fresh undertones
crisp like fruit
dawn - displayed
Dulcet cheekbones
blush - to interrupt -
inklings of pink
into November grays
underpin sorbet flushes
fresh undertones
crisp like fruit
dawn - displayed
Dulcet cheekbones
blush - to interrupt -
inklings of pink
into November grays
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Re. Stopping The Somber
9th Nov 2017 2:28pm
very fluid write
I could see a very clear image of a woman, slowly changing... like some spark kindling something within...
(Or you could be just eating dessert :D)
Like it!
I could see a very clear image of a woman, slowly changing... like some spark kindling something within...
(Or you could be just eating dessert :D)
Like it!
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21st Dec 2017 10:31pm
Yay!!! "Crisp"!!! That is honestly one of my very, very favorite words ever. I overuse it in my work. Thank you :)