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Femme Infernale
She will not stick with betrayal
Leaving him bereft and broke
A specter of his former self
His money gone, his heart a stone
No, she insists on devastation
Desiccated husks lie in her wake
No lover has retained his health,
His sanity or soul
She locks eyes tightly onto his
Sends his essence straight to hell
Abandoned with his booze and blues
And a "So long, Ace, I'm not your muse."
Photo: Eva Green
Leaving him bereft and broke
A specter of his former self
His money gone, his heart a stone
No, she insists on devastation
Desiccated husks lie in her wake
No lover has retained his health,
His sanity or soul
She locks eyes tightly onto his
Sends his essence straight to hell
Abandoned with his booze and blues
And a "So long, Ace, I'm not your muse."
Photo: Eva Green
Published 7th Nov 2017
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7th Nov 2017 7:03pm
Oh the power of this woman ... I love her! Wish I could be more like her.
9th Nov 2017 8:39pm
7th Nov 2017 8:03pm
dearest poet fiercely intense
a woman soul eater
leaving an empty shell in her wake..
wickedly gripping read..
~Raven
a woman soul eater
leaving an empty shell in her wake..
wickedly gripping read..
~Raven
9th Nov 2017 8:40pm
She's kind of a spiritual vampire, now that I think about it. Thanks for the eloquent comment. Raven!
Anonymous
8th Nov 2017 3:27am
There are indeed those out there who will devour and leave the remains without ever looking back....excellent ink My Lovely Sir Crow...love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo
9th Nov 2017 8:44pm
I might be among those remains Lady Taryn, still picking up the pieces after all this time. I'll manage. Love you too!
8th Nov 2017 10:23am
Definitely... a powerful write !
A grown woman knows how to walk away if her emotional needs aren't met, a little girl toys with the notion of dependancy, because she knows no better.
One of the many 101 differences of a woman, and a silly girl that knows no self worth.
I guess... the muse aka woman that you depict in your scribbles knows her own self worth, and deep down, understands that life is too short to cry over spilt milk ~ 🎈😎🌷🌞
PS ~ sorry for sounding so cliche ! 🤓😜🤐
A grown woman knows how to walk away if her emotional needs aren't met, a little girl toys with the notion of dependancy, because she knows no better.
One of the many 101 differences of a woman, and a silly girl that knows no self worth.
I guess... the muse aka woman that you depict in your scribbles knows her own self worth, and deep down, understands that life is too short to cry over spilt milk ~ 🎈😎🌷🌞
PS ~ sorry for sounding so cliche ! 🤓😜🤐
9th Nov 2017 8:47pm
Doesn't sound cliché at all. This woman does know her own mind and doesn't suffer fools gladly (how's that for a cliché?). Thanks for a different and very valid perspective on these lines.
13th Nov 2017 7:47am
dearest Sir Crow sounds like a dangerous lady
one's who magic we can't help but succumb to
but whose price may be too high if it be our soul..
darkened ink..
wonderful..
love Crim
one's who magic we can't help but succumb to
but whose price may be too high if it be our soul..
darkened ink..
wonderful..
love Crim
2nd Dec 2019 3:44pm
There's nothing more dangerous than a woman coming to power and realizing that she holds the world in her hands. Tight
