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Collaboration Session 3
[Part 3]
{Naming of the Acts}
(collab of Bliss and Prophet)
‘We have to name these Acts’
“Act one demons cringing
Act two beware the crow
??”
‘I was Thinking Fires of Consequence
for 2
Did you like it...Part 2...Did you read what I added?’
“Act one on the wrong side of the door
Act two you gotta float before you can fly”
‘I like Act one ^___^
But it's kinda a long title’
“Part one..sitting there thinking”
‘Time Space Warps’
“Mindrift”
‘Dude, I'll leave it up to you.
But why does that one ring true?
ok
Like Mind Drift
and Mind Rift
I get it
Mindrift
K...and you Liked FoC?
Fires of Consequence?
Bro?
…
you still dare?
We need to name them, then
…
You choose one. One is mindrift. Three is..
1 is Mindrift
2 is Fires of Consequence
3 is Razor's Edge
4...you choose’
“Revolving Doors”
‘Did you read what I added to 4?
I tapped on an intro
Yeah, That's Good
Revolving Doors
I'm posting them
3&4
Tomorrow I'll post 1&2”
“Sweeeet”
‘Yeah It's up on Utopia
Trying to peg the type of poem
Is It Story?
Or Spiritual?’
“It's tripped out that's for sure
Not sure”
‘Kinda a drug poem
But not
I'm goin with Spiritual
But I'll probably Change it’
“Slightly more at least that's what I'd like to think anyway”
‘LOL, I always post them in reverse
So, they line up right....but people will be all like, :
"where the fuck is the first half?"....LOL
I'm going to go back over our dialogue from the past few days,
and construct some poetry just on us bullshitting’
{Naming of the Acts}
(collab of Bliss and Prophet)
‘We have to name these Acts’
“Act one demons cringing
Act two beware the crow
??”
‘I was Thinking Fires of Consequence
for 2
Did you like it...Part 2...Did you read what I added?’
“Act one on the wrong side of the door
Act two you gotta float before you can fly”
‘I like Act one ^___^
But it's kinda a long title’
“Part one..sitting there thinking”
‘Time Space Warps’
“Mindrift”
‘Dude, I'll leave it up to you.
But why does that one ring true?
ok
Like Mind Drift
and Mind Rift
I get it
Mindrift
K...and you Liked FoC?
Fires of Consequence?
Bro?
…
you still dare?
We need to name them, then
…
You choose one. One is mindrift. Three is..
1 is Mindrift
2 is Fires of Consequence
3 is Razor's Edge
4...you choose’
“Revolving Doors”
‘Did you read what I added to 4?
I tapped on an intro
Yeah, That's Good
Revolving Doors
I'm posting them
3&4
Tomorrow I'll post 1&2”
“Sweeeet”
‘Yeah It's up on Utopia
Trying to peg the type of poem
Is It Story?
Or Spiritual?’
“It's tripped out that's for sure
Not sure”
‘Kinda a drug poem
But not
I'm goin with Spiritual
But I'll probably Change it’
“Slightly more at least that's what I'd like to think anyway”
‘LOL, I always post them in reverse
So, they line up right....but people will be all like, :
"where the fuck is the first half?"....LOL
I'm going to go back over our dialogue from the past few days,
and construct some poetry just on us bullshitting’
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