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Covenant
Some people are circular
arcs of reflection;
meteorological phenomenons
refracting, dispersing droplets
above deserts despite drought
trees burning in autumn
notwithstanding death
a spring sheath
thawing silver ice
the eighth wonder
of a genuine Soul
Loyalty personified;
Their multicolored spectrum
an Air Castle Covenant
amid somber clouds
threatening destruction
~
For J
my rainbow 💜
arcs of reflection;
meteorological phenomenons
refracting, dispersing droplets
above deserts despite drought
trees burning in autumn
notwithstanding death
a spring sheath
thawing silver ice
the eighth wonder
of a genuine Soul
Loyalty personified;
Their multicolored spectrum
an Air Castle Covenant
amid somber clouds
threatening destruction
~
For J
my rainbow 💜
Published 5th Nov 2017
| Edited 6th Nov 2017
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5th Nov 2017 4:41pm
Anonymous
5th Nov 2017 4:57pm
Breath-taking.
To be compared to a rainbow is a compliment the likes of which I've never received before. And being color blind, I can only imagine the look on everyones' faces when they see me get dressed up in the sun after a rainshower.
I am truly honored and humbled by this. 💕
I Love You. 💜
To be compared to a rainbow is a compliment the likes of which I've never received before. And being color blind, I can only imagine the look on everyones' faces when they see me get dressed up in the sun after a rainshower.
I am truly honored and humbled by this. 💕
I Love You. 💜
5th Nov 2017 5:04pm
Anonymous
5th Nov 2017 5:34pm
I hope those colors are as vividly intense as the scene you've depicted. 💜
5th Nov 2017 5:37pm
They're not; I would be lying if I said they were. Those of a colorblind angel are more luminous. It comes from being contained in the heart for a lifetime.
💜❤💚💙💛
💜❤💚💙💛
5th Nov 2017 5:02pm
beautiful poetess breathtaking images
so lovely & tender is this write
this one you love is very special indeed..
true beauty shines here..
~Raven
so lovely & tender is this write
this one you love is very special indeed..
true beauty shines here..
~Raven
6th Nov 2017 4:13pm
eXcellently writ, dearest. However, ....(oh, nevermind. Just pulling a tease on you)
7th Nov 2017 00:01am
Some people ?
Your beautiful poem is so mystical that only a few people can be included in it.
Congratulations, Ahavati.
Your beautiful poem is so mystical that only a few people can be included in it.
Congratulations, Ahavati.
10th Nov 2017 12:10pm
Imagery and flow in this one is spectacular ... I just kept reading and rereading it.
12th Nov 2017 4:49pm
What a strong opening proclamation:
"Some people are circular
arcs of reflection;
meteorological phenomenons
refracting, dispersing droplets
above deserts despite drought"
Ever inspiring my friend :)
I'm glad such love exists in your life!
"Some people are circular
arcs of reflection;
meteorological phenomenons
refracting, dispersing droplets
above deserts despite drought"
Ever inspiring my friend :)
I'm glad such love exists in your life!
12th Nov 2017 10:50pm
❤
That's how you know someone's a positive person; they're happy for your happiness. Thank you. 💋
That's how you know someone's a positive person; they're happy for your happiness. Thank you. 💋
Anonymous
- Edited 13th Nov 2017 3:34am
13th Nov 2017 3:33am
oh Vati!
i couldnt even read this beautiful without wading
thru tears.
good lawd my dearest love...you n Johnny are gonna
have my heart smeared with all sorts of spikes of hope.
you two keeps me lingering in a realms of belief and love.
Love your soul💘
i couldnt even read this beautiful without wading
thru tears.
good lawd my dearest love...you n Johnny are gonna
have my heart smeared with all sorts of spikes of hope.
you two keeps me lingering in a realms of belief and love.
Love your soul💘
