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Inches Before Zero
"It's always over
before it ends...
The only variable is
the illusion of distance...",
she thought
as she closed the door
behind her...
before it ends...
The only variable is
the illusion of distance...",
she thought
as she closed the door
behind her...
Written by
takis1917
Published 3rd Nov 2017
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Re. Inches Before Zero
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 10:05pm
How very true... love this
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4th Nov 2017 2:59am
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3rd Nov 2017 10:09pm
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3rd Nov 2017 10:20pm
This feels like the woman is very much ‘glass half empty’ and quite done with it all.
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4th Nov 2017 3:04am
I would go as far as to say her glass has not even a drop left in it!... But she'll refill... Thank you so much for your comment!
Re. Inches Before Zero
Anonymous
- Edited 3rd Nov 2017 10:48pm
3rd Nov 2017 10:47pm
This is the true art of taking a single moment and creating poetry out of it. I loved that the title implied she was headed towards nothing or the unknown. The ellipsis used throughout the piece also adds this element of continuation, that the poem is just not finished yet.
Just beautiful, really. No qualms in reading listing this little gem. Thank you for the read.
Just beautiful, really. No qualms in reading listing this little gem. Thank you for the read.
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Re: Re. Inches Before Zero
4th Nov 2017 3:18am
You are right! The poem is just a continuation of other poems about her and in line for other ones to follow. As for her, she will keep on her journey to transcend all assumptions made about her. I was, also, pleasantly surprised by your using of the word ellipsis... Than you so much for your generous comment!
Re. Inches Before Zero
Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 6:11am
Intriguing thought!
Nice
Nice
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4th Nov 2017 10:51am
Re. Inches Before Zero
4th Nov 2017 9:27pm
dearest poet
it is over before it ends
such is the case in love & life
we are yet to realize this fact
you are the deepest type of thinker
I cherish that in a mind & poet..
~Raven
it is over before it ends
such is the case in love & life
we are yet to realize this fact
you are the deepest type of thinker
I cherish that in a mind & poet..
~Raven
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4th Nov 2017 9:55pm