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corseted for pleasure
in the violet gloaming
i saw you there
& gazed into your depths
in your eyes
supernovas are born
we kiss
& exhale stars
in repose
you trace the celestial
hidden secrets
not known to man
on my delicate curves
corseted
& laced tight
to accentuate
my tiny waist
as my bossom
swells over the top
eager to greet
the touch
of your masculine hand
with one caress
chills go down my spine
you lean in to sip
from my divinity
& i from your
golden phallus sup
we tantalize one another
with the great art
of sedution
pleasing each other
left creamy
& drunk on pleasure
until the wee hours
of the morn
when you return
to the heavens
my Greek God
not meant
to be kept
by one mortal lass
my lips a rich bruised
cranberry
swollen
from a night
of loving an immortal
i can say i kissed
the sky once
better than to never
have tasted
it at all
Published 3rd Nov 2017
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3rd Nov 2017 6:27am
Phew...i wish to have my lips a rich bruised
cranberry
swollen
amazing Raven
cranberry
swollen
amazing Raven
my apologies Sin deep blush thank you..
a lovely smile gracing my face
from your sexy comment :)
I think all deserve to be ravished
& cherished this way..
love Raven
a lovely smile gracing my face
from your sexy comment :)
I think all deserve to be ravished
& cherished this way..
love Raven
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 6:32am
**i can say i kissed
the sky once
better than to never
have tasted
it at all**
Lovely End. My darling Raven. You soard with this. I absolutely adore corsets. Vintage hand stitched or modern colors . Mwahhh 💋
the sky once
better than to never
have tasted
it at all**
Lovely End. My darling Raven. You soard with this. I absolutely adore corsets. Vintage hand stitched or modern colors . Mwahhh 💋
3rd Nov 2017 6:36am
thank you my beautiful Lady
you made my night a brighter place
with your love & comment..
by being the lovely
woman you are
& just being here :)
love Raven
you made my night a brighter place
with your love & comment..
by being the lovely
woman you are
& just being here :)
love Raven
3rd Nov 2017 6:54am
so metaphysically filling
the taste of exquisite verbiage
it felt more like a drink than a read
"in repose
you trace the celestial
hidden secrets
not known to man
on my delicate curves"
the caressing of the feminine mystique
a delicacy like none other
..
there must be such a thing as fingerprints
beneath the skin...yes?
damn this is so silky
the taste of exquisite verbiage
it felt more like a drink than a read
"in repose
you trace the celestial
hidden secrets
not known to man
on my delicate curves"
the caressing of the feminine mystique
a delicacy like none other
..
there must be such a thing as fingerprints
beneath the skin...yes?
damn this is so silky
3rd Nov 2017 6:39pm
thank you dearest Soul Soldier sigh your comment is sexy poetics by themselves..
~Raven
~Raven
3rd Nov 2017 2:51pm
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3rd Nov 2017 9:48pm
"in your eyes
supernovas are born
we kiss
& exhale stars"
Magical and majestic metaphors and expression you have..!
Very subtly pleasing visuals you have left inside me...
Love..!
-H-
supernovas are born
we kiss
& exhale stars"
Magical and majestic metaphors and expression you have..!
Very subtly pleasing visuals you have left inside me...
Love..!
-H-
4th Nov 2017 10:52pm
thank you graciously lovely poetess your comment brought me smiles :)
~Raven
~Raven
Anonymous
3rd Nov 2017 11:50pm
Raven, this is an absolutely stunning piece of ink...each stanza gets better than the previous one in its hypnotic abilities...gorgeous!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
4th Nov 2017 10:54pm
thank you beautiful poetess for such a beautiful comment there is a big smile gracing my face :)
~Raven
~Raven
Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:02am
Raven.. fucking powerful and passionate.. truly a great ink.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
4th Nov 2017 10:54pm
