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aching desire
on this eve I cast a spell
one for lovers
in darkness dwell
their love doomed
to never see light
all hell feels
this ungodly ache
into the divine realm
you are secreted
& safely kept
angels weep
even the devil
wept
for a love
gone fatefully awry
deep into the night I chant
"hear me Goddess of amor
& bless my spell
let these lovers be carnally joined"
inside the deitie's
hidden chambers
where sinful acts of pleasure
are purely natural
feed the ones who need
let their lust be appeased
on this darkened morning
fill her with the steel
of a dominant lover
i've conjured him from the depths
so he may cum to her undercover
with stealth & precision
he hits his mark
deep inside her flowering garden
he seeds her nectar
together their juices overflow
my beautiful one now sated
by her love & Master
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Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:09am
Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:11am
Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:12am
Hnnnng is the sound of me being turned on xD
In my head, it sounds a lot like Yoshi, in reality, I dont make any sound at all.
~Tryston
In my head, it sounds a lot like Yoshi, in reality, I dont make any sound at all.
~Tryston
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:14am
oh giggles that's wonderul
i'm so pleased to have had that affect :)
love Brenda
i'm so pleased to have had that affect :)
love Brenda
Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:17am
I have taken on a new identity as The Midnight Poet. Also my instagram is on my page now if you wanna follow me lol. I dont do much on instagram other than post poems and play piano. Especially here lately. But i figure id update you anyhow. Should you choose to check out my instagram, i hope you enjoy. :) (ps ignore photos of me, im gross xD)
~Tryston
~Tryston
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:20am
I will check you out as the Midnight Poet & don't be so hard on yourself i'm sure you're handsome not that our appearance on the outside speaks to of who we really are it doesn't..
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 9:22am
Im decent lol.
I really wanna get myself out there though, know what i mean?
~Midnight
I really wanna get myself out there though, know what i mean?
~Midnight
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Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 10:10am
Others, playing god bring dead back to life...
You, when playing deity, bring to living the life they miss...
The latter much preferred in the cave I inhabit...
You, when playing deity, bring to living the life they miss...
The latter much preferred in the cave I inhabit...
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 11:34am
thank you dearest Takis for such a lovely comment.. yes here I am playing deity for a deep kind of love..
love Crim
love Crim
Re. aching desire
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 12:35pm
Oh, your beautiful one is going to squeeee all over the page when she sees this one! You have created a thing of beauty here, my lovely Dark Angel. She is going to love it. I do so love you

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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 4:36pm
Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 1:37pm
I feel like I've just enjoyed a decadent meal of deviance n I want more!! lol
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 4:36pm
Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 2:26pm
the conjuring...
a peering through dimensions
calling down
bringing forth
the carnivorous..
yeahh..this one crawls over the senses
sooo exquisitely dark Crim..
a peering through dimensions
calling down
bringing forth
the carnivorous..
yeahh..this one crawls over the senses
sooo exquisitely dark Crim..
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 4:37pm
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2nd Nov 2017 4:38pm
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Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 4:13pm
Wow, love this...the wanting, the yearning....wonderful
on this eve I cast a spell
one for lovers
in darkness dwell
great beginning as well
on this eve I cast a spell
one for lovers
in darkness dwell
great beginning as well
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 4:38pm
Re. aching desire
Anonymous
2nd Nov 2017 6:07pm
My love...I would have never thought the words we spoke last night would flourish into such a masterpiece...the depths of love you and I feel for each other shows in these prayers and wishes you call out...our souls are bound despite time and space...i will cherish this until my last breath...thank you so very much my love...
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxoxoxox
I love you passionately
yours always & forever
Love Taryn xoxoxoxoxox

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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 6:37pm
thank you my love i'm over the moon with joy that you liked this.. yes I was deeply stirred last night by your deep passion for your Master.. so I thought I would conjure a love spell for you :)
I love you passionately..
Brenda
I love you passionately..
Brenda
Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 6:13pm
This is erotic but with such fantastical beauty and majesty. My favorite lines:
with stealth & precision
he hits his mark
deep inside her flowering garden
he seeds her nectar
Sounds like the hunter is finally vanquished. Beautiful work Crim!
with stealth & precision
he hits his mark
deep inside her flowering garden
he seeds her nectar
Sounds like the hunter is finally vanquished. Beautiful work Crim!
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Re: Re. aching desire
2nd Nov 2017 6:38pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow most graciously you gifted me smiles today with your comment :)
love Crim
love Crim
Re. aching desire
3rd Nov 2017 6:13pm
Anything I say here, (being so late to the party), is going to sound like: Duh, well me too!.
But hey, I'll accept that, for agreeing with the above comments.
Nicely done, My Lady
But hey, I'll accept that, for agreeing with the above comments.
Nicely done, My Lady
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Re: Re. aching desire
3rd Nov 2017 7:20pm
thank you beautiful Teri big smile gracing my face from your visit :)
love Crimsin
love Crimsin
Re. aching desire
3rd Nov 2017 8:14pm
such passion and longing, a beautifully crafted passion poem - loved it :-)
Huge Big hugs :-))))))
Huge Big hugs :-))))))
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Re: Re. aching desire
3rd Nov 2017 8:27pm
thank you dearest David for feeling the passion I intended to convey..
love & hugs..
Brenda
love & hugs..
Brenda
Re. aching desire
Anonymous
4th Nov 2017 00:12am
Brenda.. simply breathtaking.. you're truly the goddess of ink.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave

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Re: Re. aching desire
4th Nov 2017 11:43pm
thank you my brother Dave you're too kind to me.. i'm blushing..
love you..
Brenda
love you..
Brenda
Re. aching desire
5th Nov 2017 8:31pm
“you are secreted
& safely kept”
Crim you’ve outdone yourself! Beautifully crafted, you are a master of such art! I ache under the spell of your poem <3
& safely kept”
Crim you’ve outdone yourself! Beautifully crafted, you are a master of such art! I ache under the spell of your poem <3
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Re: Re. aching desire
6th Nov 2017 2:37am
thank you graciously beautiful Nightbird your comments bring me such joy :)
love Crim
love Crim