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He
He loves to watch me scribble
when I am sitting at the table
in his poetic mind
my slender fingers holding a quill
exploring the depth of my soul
Truly is extremely sensual
Glance at him
step out from the shower
swathed in a white towel
the air is fermented
by emitting the scent of lavender
I call to him, “Hold me, babe!”
and stop writing while he is approaching
look at his broad chest
He raises his eyes and shares a stare
see the smile I have been craving for
I thought he is going to lift me
and put me on the bed
but he dresses up instead
attaches his chest to my back
lays his chin on my shoulder
holds his breath
watches me play with words
His romanticism
deciphers my poems into the beauty
which he considers an oriental mystery
ah, the mysticism
just what he has imagined about me
my ancient poet from Sung Dynasty
the great mystic master Su Tong Po
now has become his new idol
His sensibility
leads his affection toward me
beyond blood and body
when I try hard to stifle yawning
he bends forward and holds me up
tucks me in bed
kisses my forehead
caresses my silky black hair
until I fall into deep sleep
This is the love we cherish
soul to soul
like a magnet to metal
spirit to spirit
like a lake reflection
faith to faith
like a compass to the north
more than skin on skin
beneath my seductive flesh
when I am sitting at the table
in his poetic mind
my slender fingers holding a quill
exploring the depth of my soul
Truly is extremely sensual
Glance at him
step out from the shower
swathed in a white towel
the air is fermented
by emitting the scent of lavender
I call to him, “Hold me, babe!”
and stop writing while he is approaching
look at his broad chest
He raises his eyes and shares a stare
see the smile I have been craving for
I thought he is going to lift me
and put me on the bed
but he dresses up instead
attaches his chest to my back
lays his chin on my shoulder
holds his breath
watches me play with words
His romanticism
deciphers my poems into the beauty
which he considers an oriental mystery
ah, the mysticism
just what he has imagined about me
my ancient poet from Sung Dynasty
the great mystic master Su Tong Po
now has become his new idol
His sensibility
leads his affection toward me
beyond blood and body
when I try hard to stifle yawning
he bends forward and holds me up
tucks me in bed
kisses my forehead
caresses my silky black hair
until I fall into deep sleep
This is the love we cherish
soul to soul
like a magnet to metal
spirit to spirit
like a lake reflection
faith to faith
like a compass to the north
more than skin on skin
beneath my seductive flesh
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1st Nov 2017 2:09pm
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Re: Re. He
Hey Stillborn, hmmm glad you loved Su Shi (蘇軾) as well lol. Curious about that if you are Asian. Thank you for the read, comment, and RL add. Your support means a lot to me.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
1st Nov 2017 5:04pm
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Re: Re. He
1st Nov 2017 5:20pm
That's cool. So you have learned Chinese culture. Welcome to Taiwan some day.😊😊😊
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1st Nov 2017 5:27pm
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1st Nov 2017 5:47pm
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2nd Nov 2017 2:12am
Re. He
1st Nov 2017 5:58pm
"He" is a very lucky man to be able to share words and affection with such a woman...I'm envious of this poetic romance ...I love the last stanza very much...you were in the zone...kisses Jasmine-J
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Re: Re. He
2nd Nov 2017 2:17am
Jeff, my dear friend, so so much thank you. You are always the one I want to share my feelings with. Very grateful to have your solid support. Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
Anonymous
1st Nov 2017 10:56pm
Amazing write

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Re: Re. He
2nd Nov 2017 1:38am
Hey Rags, glad you like it. Miss your comment so much. Thank you for your support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
2nd Nov 2017 2:57pm
I too loved the reference to a oriental poet, it's important I believe to have a sampling of every voice in spilled ink to further appreciate the art of Poetics... outstanding n romantic... lucky dude too
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Re: Re. He
2nd Nov 2017 3:08pm
Hey Ric. love your visit and comment. Glad you loved the reference about the ancient poet Su Shi, but I can't help but think of sushi too lol....the translation is funny....Appreciate your always support.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
3rd Nov 2017 7:18pm
a beautiful love poem - this is the way love should be :-)
Excellent ink :-)
Excellent ink :-)
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Re: Re. He
4th Nov 2017 3:03am
Dear David, glad to receive your comment. Thank you for sharing your thought. Your encouragement is really nice...。
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
5th Nov 2017 7:17am
Re: Re. He
5th Nov 2017 7:44am
Thank you Daniel, you really know oriental romanticism.... Thank you for spending time to read and comment. Your support is very precious to me.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
5th Nov 2017 8:01am
Re: Re. He
5th Nov 2017 8:16am
Hey Coolman, nice to meet you here, and thank you for commenting. Glad you like the words.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
Re: Re. He
5th Nov 2017 8:20am
Hey RoseJasmine !!!!! ...Thanks so much...welcome to learn African culture too
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Re: Re. He
6th Nov 2017 12:15pm
Hey Peninnah, nice to see you again. I couldn't help but smile as I saw your comment. I suppose wooowww means it's good...... truly appreciate your support.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
8th Nov 2017 5:13pm
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Re: Re. He
8th Nov 2017 5:34pm
Thank you Silence. Glad to read your comment and to know you like it. Your words are precious to me, they are so warm and tender.....
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
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16th Nov 2017 10:44pm
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Re: Re. He
16th Nov 2017 11:05pm
Thank you Danny for the nice comment. Enjoy your visit very much!
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
Re. He
2nd Dec 2017 2:16am
"His sensibility
leads his affection toward me
beyond blood and body "
killer line
can i say my favorite I've read on DUP.. so amazing this poem brought me to such a place of love i long to be. thank you
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Re: Re. He
2nd Dec 2017 2:36am
Than you so much dear mariellewrites. Your comment reminds me of such a nice person in my life now. Yeah, he is one of my best friend and loving me unconditionally.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine