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Writers Block Haikus 7.0
(i) Arouse Me
I've got writers block
And just like a flaccid cock
It needs arousal
(ii) Firing Blanks
There is a blank page
Stuck firmly inside my head
And I am brain dead
(iii) Impotent
I have no ink left
There’s no lead in my pencil
My mind impotent
(iv) The Silence of the Keys
My keyboard is quiet
The picking and clicking gone
Silent enemy
(v) Seek and Ye Shall Find
Inspiration lost
Sought but I was found wanting
Oh for an idea
(vi) Too Little
I had a little thought
Deep down inside my little head
From little came nothing
(vii) Headache
My muse now of pain
I head butted the desk with force
Anything left split
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Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
These are VERY well done, David. Describes me at times and probably all of us.
The humor is first rate, unforced just like the haikus themselves.
Liked this a lot
The humor is first rate, unforced just like the haikus themselves.
Liked this a lot
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1st Nov 2017 2:55am
writers block can be a curse :-(
I am glad you enjoyed these :-) Huge Hugssss :-))))
I am glad you enjoyed these :-) Huge Hugssss :-))))
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30th Oct 2017 9:04pm
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1st Nov 2017 2:56am
Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
Anonymous
30th Oct 2017 9:33pm
Awe. You having writers block. NO SAY IT ISN'T TRUE... What the hell would I read . Don't scare me like that Mr M
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1st Nov 2017 2:57am
Thankfully it is very rare for me - worry not :-)
still writing like a madman :-))))))
still writing like a madman :-))))))
Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
30th Oct 2017 9:40pm
Ouch! I can truly understand the painful torment associated with writer's block....as will so many of your faithful followers, and new readers, alike!
David, throughout each individual haiku, the emotional responses are intense, and creatively expressed...tempered with just the exact amount of your exceptional humor. Your final one,however, leaves a mental picture that has me shuddering...cringing...but (sort of) smiling....I mean, nothing like head-banging to jar one's imagination! (LOL)
These are cleverly crafted--indeed! Soothing hugs, and extra aspirin, are on their way!!
David, throughout each individual haiku, the emotional responses are intense, and creatively expressed...tempered with just the exact amount of your exceptional humor. Your final one,however, leaves a mental picture that has me shuddering...cringing...but (sort of) smiling....I mean, nothing like head-banging to jar one's imagination! (LOL)
These are cleverly crafted--indeed! Soothing hugs, and extra aspirin, are on their way!!
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1st Nov 2017 3:00am
thanks for the aspirin :-))))))))
I am so glad you enjoyed them so much, that means a lot :-)
Massively Huge Hugs :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed them so much, that means a lot :-)
Massively Huge Hugs :-)
Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
31st Oct 2017 00:26am
These are absolutely brilliant, David. And more importantly, an excellent demonstration of facing writer's block head on.
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1st Nov 2017 3:01am
sometimes giving writers block a good kicking works :-)
always glad when you like my stuff and nonsense :-)
always glad when you like my stuff and nonsense :-)
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Anonymous
31st Oct 2017 1:27am
David, David, David....I find it remarkable you feel you have writer's block when lines like this are what we are reading...they are fabulous...I hope the further inspiration you need to create excellent ink like this continues to poke at you...loved this!
too many warm fuzzies to even count headed in your direction
xoxo Taryn
too many warm fuzzies to even count headed in your direction
xoxo Taryn
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1st Nov 2017 3:03am
you are always so sweet and you loving these is such a blast :-)
Hugely massive hugs :-)
Hugely massive hugs :-)
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Anonymous
31st Oct 2017 1:20pm
You know, I'm reading these and thinking ain't no way in hell you have writer's block. Your writing belies your words, methinks. Many many hugs ! :)
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Re: Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
1st Nov 2017 3:05am
I have to be honest I don't get it often :-)))))
I am so glad you enjoyed them :-) thank you :-)
loads and loads of huge Hugs :-)))))
I am so glad you enjoyed them :-) thank you :-)
loads and loads of huge Hugs :-)))))
Re. Writers Block Haikus 7.0
5th Nov 2017 4:31pm
And that's how you overcome things just so (lol) Great wontons of glory, keep 'em comin! :))
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5th Nov 2017 9:03pm