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Until
My dreams seemed
to be nightly routine
But, one morning
I awakened;
You were real
We swarmed skies
our vibration rising
above walls and things
that could harm Us
Escaping the isolated
slaughter of loneliness
to create absolutes
despite circumstance
Drifting the distance
of a trillion stars
without giving up
until manifesting
Our Universe
~
💜
For J, Always
Painting, Marc Chagall
to be nightly routine
But, one morning
I awakened;
You were real
We swarmed skies
our vibration rising
above walls and things
that could harm Us
Escaping the isolated
slaughter of loneliness
to create absolutes
despite circumstance
Drifting the distance
of a trillion stars
without giving up
until manifesting
Our Universe
~
💜
For J, Always
Painting, Marc Chagall
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Re. Until
there you go
upsetting that god person,
thinking about your own universe ..
and god gets huffy
saying what's wrong with you
getting it together
in mine .. :)
upsetting that god person,
thinking about your own universe ..
and god gets huffy
saying what's wrong with you
getting it together
in mine .. :)
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29th Oct 2017 11:35pm
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
29th Oct 2017 11:43pm
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Anonymous
30th Oct 2017 00:05am
Absolutely inspired and beautiful. 💜
"Escaping the isolated
slaughter of loneliness"
Wow. That is a powerful phrase. And so true.
"Escaping the isolated
slaughter of loneliness"
Wow. That is a powerful phrase. And so true.
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Oct 2017 4:00am
30th Oct 2017 3:59am
You little sneak. You just blew every poet off the page on here with this ink. Bravomis Poet ~_~
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30th Oct 2017 4:42pm
the slaughter of loneliness
jaysus that's a helluva phrase there vati
superb write
xo
jaysus that's a helluva phrase there vati
superb write
xo
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30th Oct 2017 9:09pm
Escaping the isolated slaughters of loneliness
really love those lines
really love those lines
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30th Oct 2017 11:26pm
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1st Nov 2017 00:20am
wow :-) another wow poem, this was so beautiful - I'll be smiling for a while :-)
thank you for sharing this one :-)
thank you for sharing this one :-)
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1st Nov 2017 6:23pm
Euphoric ! . i deeply wish all the lovers luck and long happy life with their beloved ones ..
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