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Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
24th Oct 2017 6:51am
Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
24th Oct 2017 1:35pm
Thank You, my dear Oxy for allowing me to be inspired by your poem. You are a talented writer.
Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
24th Oct 2017 7:26am
Grace, due to eyesight limitations I am unable to read the text of your poem. I have this issue with most visual poems, as they are quite fuzzy to me. Can you post a text version in the comments section or possibly PM me the poem? Thank you, jj
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Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
My pleasure, dear poetryman! I will do just that.
Fantasy behind Pearly Curtains
dreamy eyes brown eyes
as deep as the pools of my dream
lips always with the hint of a smile
soft words kindly spoken
he is the man of my dream
hands never curled in fists
arms always filled with me
breathing to the rythmn
as one with our hearts
he is my prince charming
he lives within my hopes
he breathe with my hunger
of the flip side of my coin
he comes in my dreams
my man somewhere out there
he may come in my next cycle of life,
thundering through my senses
or the next of my soul's journey
but he is there somewhere
for should I live on every life's cycle
not meeting my soulmate.
Grace 2017
Fantasy behind Pearly Curtains
dreamy eyes brown eyes
as deep as the pools of my dream
lips always with the hint of a smile
soft words kindly spoken
he is the man of my dream
hands never curled in fists
arms always filled with me
breathing to the rythmn
as one with our hearts
he is my prince charming
he lives within my hopes
he breathe with my hunger
of the flip side of my coin
he comes in my dreams
my man somewhere out there
he may come in my next cycle of life,
thundering through my senses
or the next of my soul's journey
but he is there somewhere
for should I live on every life's cycle
not meeting my soulmate.
Grace 2017
Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
Thank you so much for the text Grace! This is such a magnificent expression of the longing all lonely hearts share with you
! I so relate to these beautiful words Grace!!! JJ
"Fantasy behind Pearly Curtains"
dreamy eyes
brown eyes
as deep as the pools of my dream lips
always with the hint of a smile
soft words kindly spoken
he is the man of my dream
hands never curled in fists
arms always filled with me
breathing to the rhythm
as one with our hearts
he is my prince charming
he lives within my hopes
he breaths with my hunger
of the flip side of my coin
he comes in my dreams
my man somewhere out there
he may come in my next cycle of life
thundering through my senses
or the next of my soul's journey
but he is there somewhere
for should I live on every life's cycle not meeting my soulmate?
! I so relate to these beautiful words Grace!!! JJ
"Fantasy behind Pearly Curtains"
dreamy eyes
brown eyes
as deep as the pools of my dream lips
always with the hint of a smile
soft words kindly spoken
he is the man of my dream
hands never curled in fists
arms always filled with me
breathing to the rhythm
as one with our hearts
he is my prince charming
he lives within my hopes
he breaths with my hunger
of the flip side of my coin
he comes in my dreams
my man somewhere out there
he may come in my next cycle of life
thundering through my senses
or the next of my soul's journey
but he is there somewhere
for should I live on every life's cycle not meeting my soulmate?
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Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
24th Oct 2017 3:07pm
I am so sorry for that jumble...glad you manage to sort it out. I have put them together better. Thank you so much for your kind comments. Poetryman:) as always you are much appreciated.
Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
25th Oct 2017 9:03pm
Wonderful piece, Grace, fantastic piece of poetry, it feels hopeful and somewhat despairing all at once, it seems very complex to me. Great read.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
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Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
26th Oct 2017 2:46am
Not so complex anonshadow:) we are always hopeful, but hopes don't always become reality. Thank you so much for reading me.
Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
26th Oct 2017 8:31pm
A fantasy that will hopefully come true for you Grace. Seems reasonable enough to me. Like the others above, I enjoy the hope you bring to this. I'm still waiting for my queen.
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Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
27th Oct 2017 5:19am
I can't believe you don't have one already...but who ever the lucky person is, I envy her.:) Thank you for reading me as always Crowfly.
Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
3rd Nov 2017 5:38pm
......if you would but let me live and fulfill that very fantasy behind those pearly curtains with you. Poignant and beautiful as only you can create 💋
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Re: Re. Fantasy behind pearly curtains
4th Nov 2017 7:56pm