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Pyramid
Our stacked syllabus
wilts
born in woeful throes
Regiments
regaled
all unctions upraided
Emaciated days dry us
dehydrating these dreams
Stillborn streams wizen
our rainless reasoning
All hail the courtly
collegiate
kings!
The barons of everything
Published 22nd Oct 2017
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22nd Oct 2017 12:32pm
Ohhhhhhhh! BOOM, that final line is amazing.
Stillborn streams wizen
our rainless reasoning
The alliteration of the s and r are fabulous! Not to mention the consonance!
Rainless reasoning - wow.
Droughts are tough on people and crops, on the economy and the world.
Well done, AtoMikOne.
Stillborn streams wizen
our rainless reasoning
The alliteration of the s and r are fabulous! Not to mention the consonance!
Rainless reasoning - wow.
Droughts are tough on people and crops, on the economy and the world.
Well done, AtoMikOne.
22nd Oct 2017 4:01pm
more liquid gold, beautifully crafted, I read it over and over again :-)
excellent ink :-)
excellent ink :-)
22nd Oct 2017 5:38pm
rainless reasoning....
i don't believe i've ever seen anyone use this sequence of words. Really made the poem for me
i don't believe i've ever seen anyone use this sequence of words. Really made the poem for me
22nd Oct 2017 10:37pm
Anonymous
28th Oct 2017 6:07am
AtoMik.. truly powerful.. love your style.. much respect..
Dave
Dave
1st Nov 2017 7:46pm
2nd Nov 2017 00:45am
