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Tempesto! (Can You Stand The Rain?) Pt.1
Barren and desert.
Lust and desire having settled in for a lengthy drought,
You traverse the mountains of the mundane-the doldrums
of life.
Searching.
Looking towards the heavens for relief.
Just a cool drink of water........
…...baby, I shall bring the rain.
Let me wet your body down with
gentle droplets of cooling water .
They refresh you. They will fall down upon
your body , gently.
Yes my hands, strong will gently caress you with
a tropical rain until you are..........
…...drenched. My warm waters massage your body
deeply. Close your eyes and allow me to take you places
never dreamt before this moment
You now reside in the center of my passion
The calming eye before the impact of the storm
A peacefulness that only my love can bring to you.
A strong woman being enveloped; overtaken by a strong man.
Wrapped up in his strong arms-safe from impending danger
Gentle breezes lick your flesh teasing the most sensitive, the most
erogenous zones of your sensuous body.
My mouth upon the sinewy curves of your neck
You feel the strengthening gust attack your soft shoulders
My lips linger upon your neck
I feel every soft moan eminating from within
The climate becomes a bit more tropical now.....
….nipples upon full breast. They become tight,
strained and erect. The eye of my storm begins to pass over you.
My winds strengthen. They pull you into my pleasure
as your body hotly tingles. My lips begin to tease your torso.
Your body trembles in anticipation as my lips move closer to your perceived
delight............
Lust and desire having settled in for a lengthy drought,
You traverse the mountains of the mundane-the doldrums
of life.
Searching.
Looking towards the heavens for relief.
Just a cool drink of water........
…...baby, I shall bring the rain.
Let me wet your body down with
gentle droplets of cooling water .
They refresh you. They will fall down upon
your body , gently.
Yes my hands, strong will gently caress you with
a tropical rain until you are..........
…...drenched. My warm waters massage your body
deeply. Close your eyes and allow me to take you places
never dreamt before this moment
You now reside in the center of my passion
The calming eye before the impact of the storm
A peacefulness that only my love can bring to you.
A strong woman being enveloped; overtaken by a strong man.
Wrapped up in his strong arms-safe from impending danger
Gentle breezes lick your flesh teasing the most sensitive, the most
erogenous zones of your sensuous body.
My mouth upon the sinewy curves of your neck
You feel the strengthening gust attack your soft shoulders
My lips linger upon your neck
I feel every soft moan eminating from within
The climate becomes a bit more tropical now.....
….nipples upon full breast. They become tight,
strained and erect. The eye of my storm begins to pass over you.
My winds strengthen. They pull you into my pleasure
as your body hotly tingles. My lips begin to tease your torso.
Your body trembles in anticipation as my lips move closer to your perceived
delight............
Published 15th Sep 2011
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Anonymous
15th Sep 2011 6:22am
Great use of imagery here. Enjoyed it. Bravo!
15th Sep 2011 6:38am
.....what I was shooting for here. Word painting and metaphor describing the Temptuous Storm of Love/Lust. When it's good, it's just like this. : )
TY
TY
15th Sep 2011 7:12am
Already have me thinking Barry White should be channeled! Mother nature's beauty---the climate and the human body rolled into a mosaic of words. Well done! The New Edition song of the same name doesn't hurt either.
15th Sep 2011 11:50am
15th Sep 2011 1:01pm
This poem is outstanding! It is so tranquil,sensual and beautifully erotic..peace Crim :)
Anonymous
15th Sep 2011 2:32pm
I agree with Crim this is OUTSTANDING!
15th Sep 2011 3:40pm
15th Sep 2011 4:20pm
