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Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
Been feeling this urge, this surge;
crawling up the core, moving back-
down to the secret door yearning lust
Aching and shaking;
remove the soaked garments drenched in desire
Expose the cue of inviting destruction
Tender and moist,
a warm and delicious scent-
take the pole
pierce this hole
strike with all might
Filling with energy,
mind goes aloof-
bursting with joy,
head goes above the clouds..
Quicker
rougher
stronger
harder
Mouth opens wide-
on a verge to scream,
holding in...
'Gotta avoid the noises
Taste the air -
wet and hot
dampens with excitement so sweet of thrill
Advancing closer
getting so near
there's a crescendo of glee raging up the heavens..
there's a rainbow ahead, in the scattered visions
Faster and faster-
teat gets sore
faster and faster-
heart goes million miles
A trance
A catalepsy...
All release in awe, of intense asphyxiation
done with a grin of satisfaction
crawling up the core, moving back-
down to the secret door yearning lust
Aching and shaking;
remove the soaked garments drenched in desire
Expose the cue of inviting destruction
Tender and moist,
a warm and delicious scent-
take the pole
pierce this hole
strike with all might
Filling with energy,
mind goes aloof-
bursting with joy,
head goes above the clouds..
Quicker
rougher
stronger
harder
Mouth opens wide-
on a verge to scream,
holding in...
'Gotta avoid the noises
Taste the air -
wet and hot
dampens with excitement so sweet of thrill
Advancing closer
getting so near
there's a crescendo of glee raging up the heavens..
there's a rainbow ahead, in the scattered visions
Faster and faster-
teat gets sore
faster and faster-
heart goes million miles
A trance
A catalepsy...
All release in awe, of intense asphyxiation
done with a grin of satisfaction
Written by
SourMelon0313
(H)
Published 20th Oct 2017
| Edited 28th Nov 2017
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Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
20th Oct 2017 6:56am
Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
20th Oct 2017 10:04am
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
20th Oct 2017 9:56pm
My goodness, THATS a mighty thrilling ride into pleasures haven....mmmmmm...like Kentucky fried...LMAO...
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Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
20th Oct 2017 11:58pm
Aaa! it is such an honor! thank you so much lol I was kinda if-y about it, but if it's yummy! then it must be so..! :) I really , truly appreciate it!
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
20th Oct 2017 11:24pm
Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
21st Oct 2017 00:00am
I'm so happy you think so!! :) Thank you soo much! Glad a work of mine can bring SOMETHING lol Truly am greatful!
Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
21st Oct 2017 00:02am
Oh so much more than a mere something ... rapturous stream of consciousness ... sensual immediacy ... the sweet spot of erotic poetry!
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Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
21st Oct 2017 00:14am
I am so pleased you think so!! :) I was very unsure of this piece... I wished exactly what you have described in this piece, but there were so many works such as yours, that brings so much detail and visual in a poem! Thank you so much... I will work harder!
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
21st Oct 2017 00:39am
Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
21st Oct 2017 00:55am
lol thank you..! :) glad there was a kick to this poem I appreciate your reads..!
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
22nd Oct 2017 7:56am
Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
22nd Oct 2017 8:02am
Thank you so much..! lol I wasn't sure at first with this piece, but I am glad you enjoyed it..! Self-Destruction... We all know what that is...haha :)
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
22nd Oct 2017 8:02am
unholy hell this is hot beautiful poetess
love the raw passion & intensity of this write..
sexy line here..
"Expose the cue of inviting destruction.."
so sensual what a way to go ;)
love Crim
love the raw passion & intensity of this write..
sexy line here..
"Expose the cue of inviting destruction.."
so sensual what a way to go ;)
love Crim
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Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
22nd Oct 2017 8:12am
I am so pleased that you think so...! Haha, I had so many doubts about this piece, but your wonderful feedback has left me with to tears of joy..! I really appreciate it..! :)
Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
5th Nov 2017 7:32am
I love your rhythm through this...a drum beat and solo of sexual innuendo..
-Jeff
-Jeff
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Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
7th Nov 2017 7:02pm
Talk about erotic and hot
from the opening line...been feeling this urge, this surge...i was hooked and moist
there’s a rainbow ahead
wow
from the opening line...been feeling this urge, this surge...i was hooked and moist
there’s a rainbow ahead
wow
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Re: Re. Self-Destruction...an Uplifting Release
7th Nov 2017 9:43pm
Greatly appreciated dear SIN!
thank you..
so much...
after a while of unsatisfied lust, a one hot "self-destruction" really does the trick..! lol
-H-
thank you..
so much...
after a while of unsatisfied lust, a one hot "self-destruction" really does the trick..! lol
-H-
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18th Nov 2017 2:21am