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Those Lies Left Me so Ill
Lies...
Were the words you spoke
Lies...
Were the sweetened words I drank
A bottle of wine you made from poisoned fruits;
saturated and processed;
with disgustingly masterful filtration
Ever so clueless,
ever so happily;
I swallowed, and gulped-
in the tainted glass of love
Pleasing "truths" of your being;
you poured it with such gentle gesture-
fed me with such kindred eyes
A fragrance of true value it seemed...
Oh, but how it bittered in my mouth!
How it left me so drunk!
Taking it, without any suspicion..
Be careful-
what to believe in..
Careful what you partake!
For "Love" and comfort of deceiving truths-
are packaged,
sealed ever so tight
Cannot be so sweet..
Cannot be so perfect
Do not stomach those artificial containments...!
Decompose of those manufactured goods....!
Those lies...
leaves one so ill
Were the words you spoke
Lies...
Were the sweetened words I drank
A bottle of wine you made from poisoned fruits;
saturated and processed;
with disgustingly masterful filtration
Ever so clueless,
ever so happily;
I swallowed, and gulped-
in the tainted glass of love
Pleasing "truths" of your being;
you poured it with such gentle gesture-
fed me with such kindred eyes
A fragrance of true value it seemed...
Oh, but how it bittered in my mouth!
How it left me so drunk!
Taking it, without any suspicion..
Be careful-
what to believe in..
Careful what you partake!
For "Love" and comfort of deceiving truths-
are packaged,
sealed ever so tight
Cannot be so sweet..
Cannot be so perfect
Do not stomach those artificial containments...!
Decompose of those manufactured goods....!
Those lies...
leaves one so ill
Published 22nd Oct 2017
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22nd Oct 2017 11:51am
Oh ... this is the script for my heart ... at least recently. "Bottle of wine from poisoned fruits" - simply perfect. The sinister preparation ... the innocent consumption. Love as something prepared ... packaged.
I feel the pain ... but it's not whinnying "Oh poor me" No ... it shares, warns.
I feel the pain ... but it's not whinnying "Oh poor me" No ... it shares, warns.
22nd Oct 2017 2:52pm
I am so glad that it can connect to your heart! :) Yes it warns...alarming, and hurts..! Anyone who gets a taste of this kind of "love" it would leave them sick as well! Really appreciate your comment, :)
23rd Oct 2017 00:09am
Sometimes that 'sickness'
is born purely of hope that this will n can be true eventually... N keep in mind, sometimes those 'lies' in one's eyes, could very well be their truth in theirs... Just never know
is born purely of hope that this will n can be true eventually... N keep in mind, sometimes those 'lies' in one's eyes, could very well be their truth in theirs... Just never know
23rd Oct 2017 00:36am
I completely agree..! Hope spurs in one, and when it doesn't come to be, it can be the disappointment that is the virus in which makes you sick. Yes truth is what you believe to be true, and lies can be what you don't believe... But there are cases where one just flat out lies. And keeps it hidden so well- this is the case which I've written about. Thank you for your feedback an your words of wisdom! I appreciate your reads and comments dear Poet! :)
24th Oct 2017 4:58am
Great write intensely clear vivid picture painted , you seem very a articulate person good ink
24th Oct 2017 9:41am
Thank you so much for your visit and read Cosmo..! I tried my best to brush in the best colors I can. But I still have room o improve..! Greatly appreciate you..!
24th Oct 2017 10:36pm
When in love we'll fall for anything... Very strong in expressing the anger and bitterness of the deceived and a powerful emotional appeal to all not to be so gullible, in the end. Excellent write!
24th Oct 2017 10:40pm
Yes we do fall.. and fall quite deeply at that... Thank you so much for your reads and comments..! I really appreciate it..!
1st Nov 2017 10:10pm
"A bottle of wine you made from poisoned fruits;
saturated and processed;
with disgustingly masterful filtration"
a deeply felt write
of love built from fabrications on his side
& a beautiful innocence on your part
don't be hard on yourself
some of these people are masters
at the art of deception..
love Crim
saturated and processed;
with disgustingly masterful filtration"
a deeply felt write
of love built from fabrications on his side
& a beautiful innocence on your part
don't be hard on yourself
some of these people are masters
at the art of deception..
love Crim
1st Nov 2017 10:14pm
oh...! Thank you lol
I have yet to learn in the ways of expression and poetry... but I do appreciate your wonderful feedbacks!
I have yet to learn in the ways of expression and poetry... but I do appreciate your wonderful feedbacks!
1st Nov 2017 10:21pm
you are doing beautifully
you share your soul
from what i've read
& that's most important..
love Crim
you share your soul
from what i've read
& that's most important..
love Crim
9th Jan 2018 00:01am
9th Jan 2018 1:19am
Yes..
it is not something we can savor with delighted heart..
Thank you so much! :)
<3
H
it is not something we can savor with delighted heart..
Thank you so much! :)
<3
H
