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s i l e n c e ii
is beautiful
sometimes
the best
language
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sometimes
the best
remedy
action
reaction
sometimes
the best
meditation
medication
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sometimes
the best
opinion
option
outcome
sometimes
the best
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Published 19th Oct 2017
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19th Oct 2017 2:09pm
19th Oct 2017 2:13pm
Gorgeous!! Visually impacting... I just keep reading it over and over- succinct, dreamy, realities. I enjoyed this :)
19th Oct 2017 6:47pm
welcome
is the Friend!
with such a beautiful vision,
as they say beauty lies in the...
honor
is all mine.
appreciation
beyond words.
is the Friend!
with such a beautiful vision,
as they say beauty lies in the...
honor
is all mine.
appreciation
beyond words.
19th Oct 2017 4:36pm
I like the visuals
I can feel real effort.
Silence is the loudest voice
we all hear it.
I can feel real effort.
Silence is the loudest voice
we all hear it.
19th Oct 2017 6:49pm
welcome
is the peer
the appreciation
the review
yes
indeed
we hear it,
loudest.
peer's visit
appreciation
held deep
and close.
is the peer
the appreciation
the review
yes
indeed
we hear it,
loudest.
peer's visit
appreciation
held deep
and close.
19th Oct 2017 6:29pm
Silence really is golden. I love the way you set the poem out and the poem of course. :)
21st Oct 2017 10:47pm
welcome
is the peer
and the golden words.
as well as
the review.
all appreciated
immensely.
is the peer
and the golden words.
as well as
the review.
all appreciated
immensely.
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
21st Oct 2017 8:14pm
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welcome
is the peer
admired
respected.
glad
had some
pleasant effect.
poet
review
welcomed
appreciated
immensely.
is the peer
admired
respected.
glad
had some
pleasant effect.
poet
review
welcomed
appreciated
immensely.
22nd Oct 2017 11:24pm
indeed
it is.
and yes
ambiguous
too.
esteemed peer's
visit
review
welcomed
appreciated
immensely.
it is.
and yes
ambiguous
too.
esteemed peer's
visit
review
welcomed
appreciated
immensely.
