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Worth waitin' for...
Like poured
honey,
achingly slow
I've seen it
so I know...
Like that '25th day'
occurin' e'ver Year
The excitement
builds as it nears...
The burger
awaitin'
the Ketchup
Some of 'em
too slow
can't catch up...
It's always,
always "worth
the wait..."
honey,
achingly slow
I've seen it
so I know...
Like that '25th day'
occurin' e'ver Year
The excitement
builds as it nears...
The burger
awaitin'
the Ketchup
Some of 'em
too slow
can't catch up...
It's always,
always "worth
the wait..."
Published 12th Oct 2017
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12th Oct 2017 11:57am
poem
expression
delicate..deliciously delivered
basted in love
worth waiting
for
indeed.
the emotions,
the ingredients
mixed, served darn well!
expression
delicate..deliciously delivered
basted in love
worth waiting
for
indeed.
the emotions,
the ingredients
mixed, served darn well!
12th Oct 2017 1:06pm
12th Oct 2017 12:06pm
12th Oct 2017 1:07pm
Yup, like a good Ole fashioned home cooked meal...lol...thank you my sweet lady... :)
12th Oct 2017 12:18pm
aw Poe this is wonderful :)
yes all things worthwhile are worth the wait..
love Crim
yes all things worthwhile are worth the wait..
love Crim
12th Oct 2017 1:08pm
Crim, you ain't Neva lie...well yea maybe but hey I'll never tell lol...JK...thanks a bunch my dear! :)
12th Oct 2017 1:49pm
12th Oct 2017 1:54pm
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 2:08pm
Ahh, this is great! I love the burger and ketchup. Such a great metaphor! :)
12th Oct 2017 2:14pm
Lol Yea that... thanks I was rooting my own horn about how I make a mean burger on the grill... lol appreciate u...
12th Oct 2017 2:26pm
Lettuce, tomato and mayo please, hold the mustard.
Damn, that was a delicious write.
Seconds??
Damn, that was a delicious write.
Seconds??
12th Oct 2017 2:40pm
Shit now you have me wanting, as my Lil nephew used to say it...a " sam-itch" lol Thank u so much my dear friend, grateful always! :)
12th Oct 2017 2:52pm
12th Oct 2017 3:55pm
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 2:36pm
Definitely worth the wait... Beautiful as always <3
12th Oct 2017 2:42pm
Aaaaawww...sweetness, gosh...super blushing goin on here lol...deeply, n always... Thankful for u... :)
Anonymous
12th Oct 2017 6:11pm
worth the wait..yep?
especially when it's well done
especially when it's well done
12th Oct 2017 8:50pm
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13th Oct 2017 9:56am
Anonymous
14th Oct 2017 00:35am
PM!!! Nothing should ever be rushed - all should be savored whether pain or pleasure...it makes us all the more enriched...well done!!
Xoxo Taryn
Xoxo Taryn
14th Oct 2017 9:52am
Big thanks sweetness...I couldn't agree more of course, appreciate the continued support... :)
14th Oct 2017 5:17am
14th Oct 2017 9:54am
Thank you...I'm pleased you were satisfied, maybe that means you'll come back for seconds lol...appreciate you... :)
Anonymous
14th Oct 2017 6:25am
Sweetly tasteful.
14th Oct 2017 9:55am
14th Oct 2017 8:59am
Yeah, I believe someone or something is worth waiting for, that's why I am still alive and keep persuing.....Dear Ric. thank you for sharing this uplifting piece.....
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
14th Oct 2017 10:16am
RJ, I'm sure u will find your desire realized in time, meantime, I'm gonna bask in the smiles u gave me here...thank you so much...
Anonymous
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14th Oct 2017 9:48pm
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14th Oct 2017 10:11pm
Yup Yup...so right u are lady... thank you, I'm humbled by your continued support of your ink. :)
20th Oct 2017 6:55am
20th Oct 2017 10:13am
Yes yes, so right you are my friend...truly thankful for you thoughts n support... :)
Anonymous
23rd Oct 2017 00:04am
Yes very lovely and worthy..if having to wait.
special and rare
special and rare
23rd Oct 2017 1:14am
