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ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
Yea, as you might expect
I dreamt, dreams of you n' I
It felt so real, it was surreal
the effect of your moans
n' pleasured sighs...
See, the scene started out
innocent enough, but turned
on a dime, when you strutted
out in a thong n' I choked on
my drink, as you slyly asked,
"Baby what's wrong?"
Instantly, that beast came out
n' I rushed with urgency, snatched
up my baby, intent with this steeled
meat-prong pushin' it deeply
in every hole, it belonged...
From the top to bottom,
I gave you the dick, never
could settle on just one
place for where I'd stick
So with every lick, n' flick,
the tip from my hit... sent you
into overdrive, driving me
insane to split your sweet
slit, suckle your clit, n'
pound that pretty ass a bit...
It went on for hours,
then days n' days n' days
when we make love, we're nothin'
but lost in our craze, as we crave
to do more... to CUM, like addicts
all fucked up in our orgasmic haze...
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Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 2:10am
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11th Oct 2017 2:15am
Thank you, I'm pleased it was effective I'm grateful for your thoughts n time :)
Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 2:20am
It's very HOT! lol it brings visions with great passion in love making , being really sweaty yet satisfying every sexual crave! Very great work...
Anyone would awake from this dream with a pleasant surprise in their bedsheet..
Anyone would awake from this dream with a pleasant surprise in their bedsheet..
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11th Oct 2017 2:39am
Everyone with a pleasant surprise huh? Lol That's a very funny thought...thank you once more for visiting n leaving a smile on my page...appreciate it much :)
Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
Anonymous
11th Oct 2017 6:48am
Wow, felt like I was in your dream there lol. HOT. Beautiful. Love.
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Re: Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 10:33am
Well that comment was so awesome, I gotta say step into my dreams then!! lol truly thank you for the sweetness n support always my dear lady... :)
Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 12:04pm
This is very sensual and sexual, the view of the two poeople through your ink overfloods all over the page....it's pretty fun about the part when you saw her in a thong and choked on your drink and she asked "Baby what's wrong?" lol. You are a super erotic poet.....
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 12:09pm
Lol Yea I think that's the storyteller part that cones out lol...but I'm happy you liked, n as always I appreciate you much sweetie...thank you! :)
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12th Oct 2017 2:44am
Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 12:05pm
There is nothing more desireable to a woman's heart than to know she aroused such feelings of desire and want in the man she loves. May your dreams always be such.
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Re: Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 12:14pm
Oh yea, dreams...if it's all I have I'd want them to stay pleasant...thank you A, you truly rock... :)
Re: Re. ADDICTED: 'A Reel Dream'
11th Oct 2017 12:20pm
I also meant to comment on the double entendre of the title. . .as in reel to reel. Very clever.
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Anonymous
- Edited 12th Oct 2017 6:18pm
12th Oct 2017 6:16pm
'when we make love, we're nothin'
but lost in our craze, as we crave
to do more... to CUM, like addicts
all fucked up in our orgasmic haze...'
damn did this ending bring this vibe full circle!!!
like a continuous flow of raw passion...
but lost in our craze, as we crave
to do more... to CUM, like addicts
all fucked up in our orgasmic haze...'
damn did this ending bring this vibe full circle!!!
like a continuous flow of raw passion...
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