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Flabbergasted
That girl, who's she sitting over there?
An undistinguished creature,
with such inexplicable flare!
A refined young lady, how would you dare?
Sugar sweet,
the birds would tweet,
"Oh, what a innocent soul!"
Let's move in,
go dive in,
uncover her mind of candy-land!
So we walk on over,
stutter and shudder,
"What fairy-tale are you from?"
But as my vision gets clearer,
now that I'm nearer,
devastated-
to see her detriment.
She holds a bloody dagger,
wears devilish smile,
then she speaks-
of such malice!
"Where have you been, and have seen, such dicey places my dear?"
Silence-
she smugly grins,
silence-
then she sings of past sins.
She sings-
of her committed lust
sings-
of her triumphant murder
sings-
of slaughter so snuff
She sang how she danced with devils,
and sang with such pride.
It ends with one spiteful question:
"Flabbergasted, aren't you now dearie dear?"
An undistinguished creature,
with such inexplicable flare!
A refined young lady, how would you dare?
Sugar sweet,
the birds would tweet,
"Oh, what a innocent soul!"
Let's move in,
go dive in,
uncover her mind of candy-land!
So we walk on over,
stutter and shudder,
"What fairy-tale are you from?"
But as my vision gets clearer,
now that I'm nearer,
devastated-
to see her detriment.
She holds a bloody dagger,
wears devilish smile,
then she speaks-
of such malice!
"Where have you been, and have seen, such dicey places my dear?"
Silence-
she smugly grins,
silence-
then she sings of past sins.
She sings-
of her committed lust
sings-
of her triumphant murder
sings-
of slaughter so snuff
She sang how she danced with devils,
and sang with such pride.
It ends with one spiteful question:
"Flabbergasted, aren't you now dearie dear?"
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