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Apterous woman, foolish heart
Brace yourself, my heart, for that thing which you must do.
A dark, destructive song rolls across delicate wings
as birds of sorrow circle endlessly overhead.
If only you could fly away.
And what a wretched creature am I,
a woman who feeds the flames of anguish
just to watch the sky catch fire. Tears of ruth will fall as ash
and there will be nothing left of me but smoke.
The shape of dreams, the tracing of souls,
are reflections in the dark. Sometimes, late at night
I see you there and when you come back, even as shadow,
I will still be a foolish woman.
(Artwork unknown)
A dark, destructive song rolls across delicate wings
as birds of sorrow circle endlessly overhead.
If only you could fly away.
And what a wretched creature am I,
a woman who feeds the flames of anguish
just to watch the sky catch fire. Tears of ruth will fall as ash
and there will be nothing left of me but smoke.
The shape of dreams, the tracing of souls,
are reflections in the dark. Sometimes, late at night
I see you there and when you come back, even as shadow,
I will still be a foolish woman.
(Artwork unknown)
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Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
9th Oct 2017 10:35am
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15th Oct 2017 2:56am
Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
9th Oct 2017 11:15am
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15th Oct 2017 3:04am
Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
9th Oct 2017 12:50pm
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15th Oct 2017 3:06am
Ah, yes, you pegged me from the first line, didn't you? Always the wise one, thank you much, kind lady...
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 2:10pm
Oh that first line...you set the scene perfectly with that one. I've said those exact words to my own heart a time or two. It doesn't get easier either. Beautiful and so very sad
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Re: Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
15th Oct 2017 3:12am
No it most definately does not, but we do it anyway, don't we? But we go on, those pieces of our hearts lingering with those we care about. Thank you for such kind words...
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Anonymous
9th Oct 2017 3:17pm
this aches the heart, Kasai.
lovely and soul-churning but as a woman i stand with
lovely and soul-churning but as a woman i stand with
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Re: Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
15th Oct 2017 3:16am
Such is the heart of a woman, emotional creatures that we are. A very thoughtful comment, thanks for sharing...
Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
11th Oct 2017 10:36pm
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15th Oct 2017 3:02am
Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
I am a foolish woman too....so a RL for me....Hope you are well Kas.....
RoseJasmine
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Re: Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
15th Oct 2017 3:01am
Very sweet of you, thanks for the RL and the concern. I'm hanging in there, working on some sketches. Wouldn't it be nice if du had an art wall of some kind? I bet there would be some amazing artwork from many creative minds here. Truly appreciate the visit, Rose....
Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
15th Oct 2017 6:19am
This is simply very beautiful and amazing poetry, I am at a loss for words.
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Re: Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
15th Oct 2017 8:50am
A loss of words is one of the highest compliments, ArthurVaso, and I thank you for taking the time to comment...
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Re: Re. Apterous woman, foolish heart
3rd Nov 2017 4:56am
Ah yes, harsh it is.
Glad you could enjoy it,
And thank you for the kind comment...
Glad you could enjoy it,
And thank you for the kind comment...
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18th Nov 2017 8:17am
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19th Nov 2017 6:43am