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Burning Away Shaddows
The light within you has illuminated a heart long ago fallen dark
Burned away the shadows with glowing red embers and your fiery spark
So as Winter creeps closer with cutting icicles to chill your aching bones
Let me silence their nervous chattering and your ghostly-Hallow moans
I can hardly express how blessed and happy I am to be your friend
An honor I don't take lightly and one I will cherish until the very end
An end that will not be made with choices spoken on these Earthly planes
But may be erased only when there is no more space for growing pains
For life's lessons do not cease no matter how many years we count our age
There's always room for the muse to fill with poetry on the unwritten final page
Burned away the shadows with glowing red embers and your fiery spark
So as Winter creeps closer with cutting icicles to chill your aching bones
Let me silence their nervous chattering and your ghostly-Hallow moans
I can hardly express how blessed and happy I am to be your friend
An honor I don't take lightly and one I will cherish until the very end
An end that will not be made with choices spoken on these Earthly planes
But may be erased only when there is no more space for growing pains
For life's lessons do not cease no matter how many years we count our age
There's always room for the muse to fill with poetry on the unwritten final page
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2017 8:50am
Beautiful !
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Re. Burning Away Shaddows
3rd Oct 2017 4:22pm
So wonderful the thoughts expressed and the words in doing so.
The poet's heart, as always, in the right place.
A.T.
The poet's heart, as always, in the right place.
A.T.
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4th Oct 2017 4:30pm
what a beautiful poem to light my way through the shadows with..
~Raven
~Raven
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16th Oct 2017 7:20pm
Beautiful! The first two lines are my absolute favorite and could be a poem by themselves.
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16th Oct 2017 7:26pm
Thank you for commenting Emmaline! The first two lines just popped into my head and inspired the rest... JJ
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21st Oct 2017 5:45am
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21st Oct 2017 6:08am
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21st Oct 2017 6:15am
Cool, but if it's for Joe Johnson yer gonna have to go. This place ain't big enough for 2 Joe Johnsons... lol
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21st Oct 2017 6:27am
lol, nope! Check out one of my poems please! Would be a very happy camper :)
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21st Oct 2017 11:01am
I will. Gotta sleep a few more hours to clear my head. I'm an old geezer... JJ