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The Bus
Is it just the
homeless man
on the bus that
is the only person
that can get off at
any stop he chooses:
I used to think so
But I learned
That destinations
Are of our own
Choosing;
Choose where
You want to
Get off
Don’t let
The bus or
Your ticket
Choose it
For you
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Re. The Bus
3rd Oct 2017 3:58am
Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:05am
yes and the right to choose when to get off or change buses :-) thank you much :-)
Re. The Bus
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2017 8:50am
Wise words my friend
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Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:05am
Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:06am
Re. The Bus
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2017 2:04pm
In this city they don't let you get on or off wherever you choose. They tell you where you can get off. So I just mostly don't get on unless I have to. My choice, my right. Great write! Hugging you!
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Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:09am
maybe you need an aluminium baseball bat then just warn the driver to stop :-) Big Big Hugs :-)
Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:10am
Re. The Bus
Anonymous
3rd Oct 2017 8:58pm
I have nothing else other than “excellent” to say about this ink my friend! Well done!!
Tons of warm fuzzies sent your way!
Xoxo Taryn
Tons of warm fuzzies sent your way!
Xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. The Bus
4th Oct 2017 3:12am
I am so glad you thought so - thank you so much :-) Massive big HUGS :-)