Voiceless

reeks of mental imprisonment  - beautifully crafted piece with power - certainly sparked my grey matter :-)

Excellent Ink :-)

Quite certainly such... it feels good to be seen... Thank You!

Glad to have tickled your fancy :-)

Voiceless,  may be the title but clearly your voice is intact...strong opening ink for the DU... :)

Wittten word has always been easier for me than face-to-face. It’s great to open up here on the DU, I appreciate everyone’s feedback :-) Thank You!

Silence speaks louder than words and here are volumes being spoken at volumes loud enough for all o hear! Welcome to DUP!
JJ

Thank you JJ! I feel welcomed :-)

Hello and welcome

yeah, grand job. steady rhythm and decent ryhme -unforced- some alliteration and more. so a fair bit of technique

good stuff

Thanks for the analytical feedback lepperochan!

I admire the clever way that you reveal your thoughts and feelings
through a voice that suggests you are unable to do so.
Beautiful Paradox

Thank you so very much arche', and for the RL add as well! I do often feel this paradox in my life.

Screaming out in silence, you are far from voiceless in this piece.  I love when a short poem is filled with such power.  Welcome to DUP, great first poem.

Thank you for the write.

:) Thank you for such kind remarks! My empowerment builds still...

Great representation of feeling silenced.

Thank you Jadedembers :)

And when the voice comes out, it can be quite powerful.
Well done.

Indeed, thank you for the comment.