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Pit of Hell inst by MiiiKXY
drag me down
to the pit of hell
shit is my citadel
sitting on little else
oh so literal
go so insane
foreign substances
all in my brain
fill up the pain
ready to kill taking aim
ill with the pen
not faking for fame
better be ready
with heavy bars
better be ready
for messy scars
shooting stars
writing memoirs from mars,
at large off the charts
this is just the start
sacrifice my heart
asking "is this art?"
or is this a symptom of depression
spilling ink hoping each line is lesson
i rhyme out my confessions
i guess it is a blessing
♫ inst by MiiiKXY ♫
➥https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APbur1THBcM
Image "Storm is Coming" by Rostyslav Zagornov
➥https://www.artstation.com/attemme
to the pit of hell
shit is my citadel
sitting on little else
oh so literal
go so insane
foreign substances
all in my brain
fill up the pain
ready to kill taking aim
ill with the pen
not faking for fame
better be ready
with heavy bars
better be ready
for messy scars
shooting stars
writing memoirs from mars,
at large off the charts
this is just the start
sacrifice my heart
asking "is this art?"
or is this a symptom of depression
spilling ink hoping each line is lesson
i rhyme out my confessions
i guess it is a blessing
♫ inst by MiiiKXY ♫
➥https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=APbur1THBcM
Image "Storm is Coming" by Rostyslav Zagornov
➥https://www.artstation.com/attemme
Published 27th Sep 2017
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honky, now you can't sling a sick sludge groove beat like that for only 45 secs...I get a cramp stopping the train...I had just hit the bowl too...I only slid down the side of the pit and the DJ quit...sometimes more is more...-J
28th Sep 2017 2:41am
bahahaha yeah, i plan on adding more, but lost the flow so posted what i had. i appreciate your feedback as always brotha!
