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The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
Was Psalm 23 – Now Sammy 23
Science and logic is my shepherd,
I shall not be ignorant.
They make me appreciate green pastures,
they lead to understanding of quiet waters,
they prove there’s no soul.
they guide me in paths of reality
for humanity’s sake.
Even though I walk through
the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil, for there is no
valley of death and no biblical evil,
your scatter cushions and your sofa,
they comfort me.
They prepare a feast for me
in the presence of Col: Saunders.
They anoint my head with knowledge;
my brain overflows.
Surely intellect and love will follow me
all the days of my life,
if I realize that the house of the Lord
Just doesn’t exist.
Science and logic is my shepherd,
I shall not be ignorant.
They make me appreciate green pastures,
they lead to understanding of quiet waters,
they prove there’s no soul.
they guide me in paths of reality
for humanity’s sake.
Even though I walk through
the valley of the shadow of death,
I will fear no evil, for there is no
valley of death and no biblical evil,
your scatter cushions and your sofa,
they comfort me.
They prepare a feast for me
in the presence of Col: Saunders.
They anoint my head with knowledge;
my brain overflows.
Surely intellect and love will follow me
all the days of my life,
if I realize that the house of the Lord
Just doesn’t exist.
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Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
27th Sep 2017 1:35am
you rebel- love this one...catches fire with each line..burning like the fake bush -or the talking snake-
bravo
bravo
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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 1:19am
I need to do something on the talking snake (lol) thanks for the read and comments my friend :-)
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
27th Sep 2017 7:47am
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29th Sep 2017 1:20am
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
Anonymous
27th Sep 2017 8:47am
Good stuff

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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 1:23am
I was bored when i wrote this (lol) thank you brother - hope you are ok :-)
Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 2:27am
Tired buddy. But doing what has to be done every minute of every day

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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 2:41am
I can't pray for you - I don't do prayer, but I am sending you Scottish fighting warrior vibes "Freeeeeeedom!" and a couple of bear hugs :-)
Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
Anonymous
29th Sep 2017 8:50am
Get goosebumps when I watch braveheart and got em after I read your comment! Lol . Luv ya brotha.

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Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
27th Sep 2017 5:39pm
Now David, there are many many psalms, is this your new calling since you exhausted the nursery rhymes? Nicely done.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 1:26am
strangely, my crazy mother was a poet and she re wrote all the psalms in rhyming verse, seemingly worked on it for years - I never got the chance to read it - my father set fire to it :-( I won't be following in her footsteps (lol) thank you :-)
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
28th Sep 2017 3:27am
As long as we're looking " out there " , we'll never find it. Because the Truth is inside us.
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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 1:27am
we need to stop agreeing on so much (lol) thank you and yes I agree totally :-)
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
28th Sep 2017 1:24pm
L2 should be one of the commandments according to David
more sense in that one sentence than in the entire holy book
bloody fine write d
#ninjakittyhugs
more sense in that one sentence than in the entire holy book
bloody fine write d
#ninjakittyhugs
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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
29th Sep 2017 1:31am
thank you sweetie :-) I have a thing for that holy book and it's not a good thing :-) loving the #ninjakittyhugs #bighighlandbearhugs
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
David....quite the " revolutionist "...are you now? ( hee! hee! ) Perhaps "The Book of David Macleod" will herald the NEW Age of
Enlightenment......:)
Intriguing Ink--mo Chara!!
Well Scribed !!
Enlightenment......:)
Intriguing Ink--mo Chara!!
Well Scribed !!
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Re: Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
30th Sep 2017 6:16pm
Yeah - I've always wanted to be the head of my own religion (lol) Hoooooooge Big Huuuuuuuugs :-)
Re. The Book of David Macleod ( The Holy Babble)
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2017 3:33pm
I have always felt the bible to be a flawed and false thing...as it was written by self-serving men. I'm not a religious person (as we all know) and it strikes me that in our own ways we all pray. That little plea that sings from our hearts in the painful and harsh times...when we don't even realize we're doing so. Those are prayers of a kind. And when I wish for you the greatest and most wonderful things, and send you loving hugs...those are prayers of a kind. We just call them wishes and hopes. Prayer, in my experience, has nothing to do with religion and everything to do with intent. This is a great piece, David! So many hugs for you

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