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The morning after
I woke up in bed
Naked... undressed
You weren't beside me
Your kiss tingles on my lips
I remember last night
Our passion unending
A sigh escapes my lips
I can feel my body melting
I get out of bed
To get redressed
But change my mind
And go to the kitchen... naked... instead
You're at the stove
Making some eggs
Get down on my knees
Right by your legs
You turn around in surprise
And smirk down at me
You ask, "where are you clothes?"
I answer, "That isn't what I need."
Your shirtless... in boxers...
I pull at them with my teeth
You turn the stove off
And lean your head back
This is what you need
Your boxers hit the floor
My hands on your thighs
I blow gently on your tip
You gasp in surprise
My tongue gliding all the way up
You're increasing in size
I take it all in and move back and forth
Your hand in my hair
You release a deep... satisfied groan
My tongue swirls around
You groan even louder
Finally you finish
Seductively I lick my lips
You pick me up forcefully
Set me down on the counter
Spread my legs open
And slowly start to enter
You slide in easy
I'm dripping wet
My nails gripping your back
We shallow fuck for now
But you start to kiss my neck
Driving me crazy
I beg you to go farther
My vision getting hazy
Breathing getting heavy
I moan and moan and moan louder
You thrust in farther
Right here
On the kitchen counter
Harder, louder, faster
Until finally we finish...
And breathe heavily together
My legs around your waist
Your hands on my hips
You bend down lower
Not a drop gone to waste
You lick me all up
The stove back on
You make me a plate
As we watch the morning news
Our lives explode with laughter
This could quite possibly be
The best morning after...
Naked... undressed
You weren't beside me
Your kiss tingles on my lips
I remember last night
Our passion unending
A sigh escapes my lips
I can feel my body melting
I get out of bed
To get redressed
But change my mind
And go to the kitchen... naked... instead
You're at the stove
Making some eggs
Get down on my knees
Right by your legs
You turn around in surprise
And smirk down at me
You ask, "where are you clothes?"
I answer, "That isn't what I need."
Your shirtless... in boxers...
I pull at them with my teeth
You turn the stove off
And lean your head back
This is what you need
Your boxers hit the floor
My hands on your thighs
I blow gently on your tip
You gasp in surprise
My tongue gliding all the way up
You're increasing in size
I take it all in and move back and forth
Your hand in my hair
You release a deep... satisfied groan
My tongue swirls around
You groan even louder
Finally you finish
Seductively I lick my lips
You pick me up forcefully
Set me down on the counter
Spread my legs open
And slowly start to enter
You slide in easy
I'm dripping wet
My nails gripping your back
We shallow fuck for now
But you start to kiss my neck
Driving me crazy
I beg you to go farther
My vision getting hazy
Breathing getting heavy
I moan and moan and moan louder
You thrust in farther
Right here
On the kitchen counter
Harder, louder, faster
Until finally we finish...
And breathe heavily together
My legs around your waist
Your hands on my hips
You bend down lower
Not a drop gone to waste
You lick me all up
The stove back on
You make me a plate
As we watch the morning news
Our lives explode with laughter
This could quite possibly be
The best morning after...
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Re. The morning after
25th Sep 2017 2:19pm
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Re. The morning after
25th Sep 2017 7:47pm
Loved the vivid imagery and sensuality of this poem.
Nice rhyme, especially the last 4 lines really work perfectly!
The ending was also excellent in expressing the happiness of lovers in love...
JJ
Nice rhyme, especially the last 4 lines really work perfectly!
The ending was also excellent in expressing the happiness of lovers in love...
JJ
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25th Sep 2017 8:01pm
Re. The morning after
25th Sep 2017 7:50pm
Now that's what I'm talking about..very graphic and to the point. Continue to unleash that beast within you
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25th Sep 2017 8:01pm
Glad you enjoyed! Finally letting her out of her cage every once in a while ;)
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25th Sep 2017 8:15pm
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25th Sep 2017 9:14pm
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25th Sep 2017 9:15pm
Re. The morning after
25th Sep 2017 10:15pm
Echo Poetryman. I could imagine the kitchen scene easily, helped by my being, as I write, in my own kitchen and naked.
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Re. The morning after
26th Sep 2017 7:32am
Re. The morning after
26th Sep 2017 8:57am
there was something definitely burning hotter than the stove that mornin..
tantalizing vibe
diggin the connectivity conveyed..
very real to life
tantalizing vibe
diggin the connectivity conveyed..
very real to life
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26th Sep 2017 8:58am
Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! "Tantalizing," is probably my favorite word anyone has used to describe this poem. Thanks ;)
Re. The morning after
27th Sep 2017 5:24pm
You turn the stove off
And lean your head back
This is what you need
ANDwhat a lovely QUICKY 69
MORNING THERE AFTER
refers NORMALLY TO POST SEX W/O CONDOM
pill to avoid a silly kid
and reading this i stood up also now to read my erotica see how again cums and goess 502223 plus adding every minute
have said so
And lean your head back
This is what you need
ANDwhat a lovely QUICKY 69
MORNING THERE AFTER
refers NORMALLY TO POST SEX W/O CONDOM
pill to avoid a silly kid
and reading this i stood up also now to read my erotica see how again cums and goess 502223 plus adding every minute
have said so
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27th Sep 2017 5:32pm
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27th Sep 2017 11:58pm
where lies the confusion if you say I will wash it right away ur poetry of sexiness as always stays
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28th Sep 2017 00:13am
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28th Sep 2017 3:52am
all fine most of u r ung i am hung age matters you are kicking the engine mine has gone cold like autumn but i love to see smiles on faces pretty some still kick stat me their smiles only you know it do read more of again as he comes a new creature has been born as again by me
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Anonymous
28th Sep 2017 7:07pm
This is sensual and very erotic and very well done.
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Anonymous
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30th Sep 2017 7:02pm
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30th Sep 2017 7:07pm
Re. The morning after
2nd Oct 2017 5:38am
I so love this, the thought of the passion that lit the fire the night before still burning brightly in the morning. Been many a year since that passion was shared with me, brings me nostalgia for earlier days.
Thank you for the write.
Thank you for the write.
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2nd Oct 2017 5:40am
Thank you for the comment! And hey, it doesn't always matter how long since it's been shared. That passion burns within every single one of us, you just gotta light it up every once in a while! Glad you enjoyed it.
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2nd Oct 2017 1:11pm
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Re. The morning after
22nd Dec 2017 7:43pm
Excellently, graphically, visually presented. I enjoyed reading --
Thank you for sharing it with us, your readers.
JJJ
Thank you for sharing it with us, your readers.
JJJ
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22nd Dec 2017 8:01pm
Re. The morning after
17th Feb 2018 2:59pm
The intimacy continues. A great feeling of love and admiration for one another.
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7th Mar 2018 3:29pm
Re. The morning after
6th Mar 2018 6:04pm
the second and maybe third cumming all desire and as the kitchen fire burns I advised my friend newly married what was he doing he said she is in the kitchen and I am readying it i said idiot go switch of the electric flame and fffck your dame she ain't lame and then he ran and i could hear his scream no it wasn't a dream again saw the cumming of cream and your poetry energised me to remember when again was as young burning the stove with his burning pistol ask how many guys have the capacity the same is with n me Thank you for the encounter i'd love to mine own remember
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Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
10th Feb 2019 8:06pm
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