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Cognitive Functions - Extraverted Feeling
Seizing richness in the score of society
Cleaving to clear tones worth serving
For our fellow fortune
Our conjoined journey
Composites of vogue
They stir sensibly
Engaging and evident
Palpable public pulsation
Never running rogue...
Accord adhered to by our silver cords
Life waters washing us to ebullient seas
Vitalizing chilly beings
Into vibrant corps
The ignition inticing
Insoluble camaraderie
For union's heat as Midsummer's Day
A collective incentive to fasten in sway
The self, a dead debtor
To hasten away...
For ego leaves black blots on our sleek stable gray
Published 22nd Sep 2017
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22nd Sep 2017 9:05am
Paints a picture of optimism and the kindred struggle of human experience. Most poets feel a need to write in the negative.
Nice
Nice
22nd Sep 2017 12:32pm
Bravo, AtoMikOne. Well conveyed. You seem to have a natural propensity for comprehension regarding the Jungian philosophy. It's refreshing in the form of poetry so well done.
Excellent wordplay.
Excellent wordplay.
22nd Sep 2017 4:03pm
My thanks to you both! :) I love typology...
God Ahavati, between this, EOs, and poetry we're leading contenders in Nerdom 😉
WrittenApologyLex, I write PLENTY of negative stuff too ;) Writing isn't always exactly the expression of jovial types, but it's nice to submit more upbeat stuff too, I feel ya.
God Ahavati, between this, EOs, and poetry we're leading contenders in Nerdom 😉
WrittenApologyLex, I write PLENTY of negative stuff too ;) Writing isn't always exactly the expression of jovial types, but it's nice to submit more upbeat stuff too, I feel ya.
22nd Sep 2017 4:15pm
Particullarly appreciate the way you rub words together. The optimistic and lucid undertones amidst a swirl of chaos and disorder creates more 'balance' than 'conflict'. And, yes, I can definitely relate to the 'ink blots' against a gray backdrop. Great write.
22nd Sep 2017 4:17pm
22nd Sep 2017 6:51pm
I am fascinated and pleased about the sensitive way you have described the first two and am so looking forward to the rest :-)
24th Oct 2017 8:31am
The first line grabs your attentions and takes you for a ride through this piece... can't get over how good that first line is, I wish I wrote that lol.
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