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sexual communion
pomengranate feelings
each a jewel
in their captured state
meant to be savored
one at a time
taste of me
bite into my lust
& free my tortured soul
i writhe in agony
at the thought of your touch
just a wink away
we are on the edge
falling off the precipice of sin
be my savior
hear my confession
as i go to my knees
i whisper hail marys
to the tip of your hardness
& i swallow all of you
take in my sunshine
while i throat your darkness
my wicked priest of debauchery
bend me to your will
i'm a little girl lost
discpline me
with an ungodly pounding
hung from the cross
of your disapproval
i take you inside my tightness
& cry out in pain
delving ever deeper
until i'm pulsing sweet juices
upon your unholy member
my ass now a black hole
it drips your cream
holy communion given
& salvation recieved
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Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 6:04pm
Amen mother effing AMEN! The body of crim, given for you! Quite the seductive piece you've got here
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Re: Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 6:31pm
thank you dearest Zach for such a fantastic comment gifting me smiles.. love Crim
Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 7:29pm
You sure don't write like "a little girl lost" Lady Crim. That last image is a doozy. Up to the thrills and spills, I see, and particularly fine work in the end.
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Re: Re. sexual communion
28th Sep 2017 3:57pm
thank you Sir Crow lol on the last image giggles at your comment I deeply apprecitate you :) love Crim
Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 7:30pm
Holymotherfuckinsuckinchristlordyjesusgodddd!!!! Whew...this was Hott!!! lol
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28th Sep 2017 3:58pm
Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 8:48pm
Holy shit Bren! Damn me to Hell for my head is filled to the point of seizing...
Glory Hallelujah!
:)
JJ
Glory Hallelujah!
:)
JJ
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28th Sep 2017 3:58pm
Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 9:23pm
I have fallen over and can't get up :-o
sexy sexy write, you are always so good at these :-) Big Hugs :-)
sexy sexy write, you are always so good at these :-) Big Hugs :-)
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28th Sep 2017 3:59pm
Re. sexual communion
21st Sep 2017 10:47pm
Well well, you've been up to some twisted shit ever since you left the nunnery .....
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Anonymous
22nd Sep 2017 3:15pm
When you bring the fire to the pages, you Burn. Them. Down. Holy cats, beautiful, this is blazing! And off to the ice machine I go... I do so love you, my beautiful Dark Angel
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28th Sep 2017 4:01pm
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Anonymous
23rd Sep 2017 2:28am
Brenda.. that's a religion i can believe in.. love you my sister..
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Dave
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30th Sep 2017 3:14pm
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30th Sep 2017 3:28pm
thank you graciously for a fantastic comment what more can a writer hope for.. love Crim
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Anonymous
30th Sep 2017 11:14pm
My love, I am arriving late but I am here...I added this gorgeous and stimulating piece into my reading list and I'm now catching up on the comment portion, lol...you KNOW this had me wiggling in my seat, every word stimulating my every nerve...you do it to me every time when you let this side of you out!! Good gods!
I love you passionately!
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
I love you passionately!
yours always & forever
xoxoxox Taryn
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Re: Re. sexual communion
4th Oct 2017 8:15pm
thank you my love so happy when I can get you wiggling in your seat just picturing you is making me wiggle in mine ;) I love you madly.. love Brenda