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Chiaroscuro
She prefers the shadow shades
The contrasts that reveal
Here and there the perfect noir
Impenetrable and pure
Night's next lover at her door
A selected stud in leather
A desire to roll the dice
A willingness to bleed
D.O.A. between the sheets
Post coital turning blue
His heart gave out, but no regret
She ignites another cigarette.
The contrasts that reveal
Here and there the perfect noir
Impenetrable and pure
Night's next lover at her door
A selected stud in leather
A desire to roll the dice
A willingness to bleed
D.O.A. between the sheets
Post coital turning blue
His heart gave out, but no regret
She ignites another cigarette.
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Re. Chiaroscuro
20th Sep 2017 10:09pm
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11th Oct 2017 10:24pm
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 00:31am
My Lovely Sir Crow, ooooh this one gave me the shivers when getting to the end...you are so good at the darkened noir...excellent imagery...I shall now light a cigarette....Love you! With much love - Taryn xoxo

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11th Oct 2017 10:26pm
Re. Chiaroscuro
21st Sep 2017 1:58pm
Definitely, a smoking hot write ~ 😎🎈🌞🌷☄
Life, is too short to live in regret !
Life, is too short to live in regret !
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Re: Re. Chiaroscuro
11th Oct 2017 10:27pm
Yes, regret's a waste of time. Just move on, seems to me, and I try to get it right next time. Thanks Shadow!
Re. Chiaroscuro
Anonymous
22nd Sep 2017 4:24am
Oh,
the consensual`ity
between two people ...
the question is:
Will he rise again
so she can indulge
in another smoke?
like, sir Fly;
you ignited this one!

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11th Oct 2017 10:28pm
Re. Chiaroscuro
28th Sep 2017 2:26pm
well that sure fixes the problem of getting him to leave in the morning
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your dames are epic, mister
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your dames are epic, mister
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11th Oct 2017 10:30pm
Re. Chiaroscuro
11th Oct 2017 4:19pm
The beginning and end were my favorite, but all-around a very good read. Thank you!
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11th Oct 2017 10:23pm