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my love
i miss you beautiful soul
bashful is the sun
as its rays kiss your skin
your beauty outshines him
& the deity of light
is put to shame
standing in your glory
my dusty rose
with the crooked smile
that lights my days
& fills my nights
with such heated desire
i wish to caress your dark places
the sore & scarred ones
where you bleed out your pain
cauterized with fire
lest anyone see
i feel your hurt
the depth of it
can not be measured
my Goddess
i will dive into your ocean
& succumb to the sharks
that eat at your mind
slay the beasts
that would steal your breath
let me breathe into you
& let's dance across the universe
waking up in a new one
where your secret desires
are fulfilled
this is what i would want,
for you my love
that everyday be filled
with passion wrought
from your Master's hand
after great golden copulations
you lie spent on his bed
to be held in his arms
knowing you are loved
& finally at home
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 17th Sep 2017
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17th Sep 2017 4:31pm
thank you beautfiul Daniella I am overjoyed that this moved you in such a way & that this write came across as intended.. sometimes our hearts open & the words come pouring forth.. you are deeply appreciated lovely lady.. love Brenda
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17th Sep 2017 7:43pm
I'm moved as well, ladies. I almost shed a few tears of my own by the end. This is fantasy poetry at its best: powerful, doubtless with some parallels to the real world. Fine work Lady Crim!
17th Sep 2017 10:48pm
thank you my dearest Sir Crow I'm so happy the feeling of this was conveyed.. love Crim
Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 8:43pm
I cried.
17th Sep 2017 10:49pm
lovely Missy such a wonderful response i'm so pleased the feeling of this write is felt.. love Brenda
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Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 11:02pm
My love....what can I say to adequately convey how much this write touched my heart and my soul? You had beads of salt being added into my cup of chachi this morning and I still can't read it without becoming an emotional mess all over again...I will forever cherish this gift you've blessed me with just as I will forever cherish you...you enchant me...
I love you passionately, madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
I love you passionately, madly, deeply
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
17th Sep 2017 11:17pm
my love you are my Goddess, sister & friend everday i get to awaken to your love i am blessed all these wishes for you are carried deep in my heart finally i was able to give them voice i am ecstatic that your felt my love for you here in these lines i love you passionately forever.. love Brenda
18th Sep 2017 1:06am
And what would we do without love,
without poetry or muses like you?
In love with this masterpiece Crim.
without poetry or muses like you?
In love with this masterpiece Crim.
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Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 3:24pm
Oh, beautiful, this one warms my heart and fills my eyes with tears. So breathtaking is your love for your lovely one. And she so deserving of every beautiful wish you've penned here for her. I do so love you, my lovely Dark Angel
20th Sep 2017 5:45pm
Anonymous
23rd Sep 2017 00:35am
Brenda.. so powerful, and protective.. to gain your love, is to know that you have that persons back.. i'm glad to know you have mine.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
28th Sep 2017 3:41pm
thank you Dave for showing love on this write.. I love you my brother.. Brenda
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10th Oct 2017 5:41pm
thank you lovely Daniella a more beautiful comment I can't imagine from a poetess who is gifted as you I beam :) love Brenda
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19th Dec 2017 2:02am
thank you dearest Xmar
for showing me love
on this very special write..
love Brenda
for showing me love
on this very special write..
love Brenda
