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I wish I knew you - 9/13/91
Our glances pass each other
locking us as one.
Your beauty leaves me helpless
brighter than the sun.
The delicacy of your face
and the luster of your hair.
Leave me secure in your arms
without a single care.
The sparkle in your eyes
and the tenderness of your touch.
Holds me tight within your love
giving me so much.
The laughter in your voice
helping to make me smile.
Keeps a love in my heart
glowing all the while.
Watching you intent
upon the book you read.
I feel an urge to hold you,
you're the one I need.
I love you more and more
from day to passing day.
With you I will go anywhere.
With you I will always stay.
If you love me as much
as I truly hope you do.
We can spend our lives together,
you with me and me with you.
locking us as one.
Your beauty leaves me helpless
brighter than the sun.
The delicacy of your face
and the luster of your hair.
Leave me secure in your arms
without a single care.
The sparkle in your eyes
and the tenderness of your touch.
Holds me tight within your love
giving me so much.
The laughter in your voice
helping to make me smile.
Keeps a love in my heart
glowing all the while.
Watching you intent
upon the book you read.
I feel an urge to hold you,
you're the one I need.
I love you more and more
from day to passing day.
With you I will go anywhere.
With you I will always stay.
If you love me as much
as I truly hope you do.
We can spend our lives together,
you with me and me with you.
Published 16th Sep 2017
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16th Sep 2017 1:43pm
I wonder who she is that caught your attention those days long ago:) Sunwolfe1745. Good write.
17th Sep 2017 00:31am
That is lost to time. I do not remember who it was. Thank you for your positive feedback.
16th Sep 2017 11:00pm
what a beautiful love tribute - I am sure many readers would be able to connect with this - elegantly constructed full of hope and promise :-)
Loved it :-)
Loved it :-)
17th Sep 2017 00:38am
Thank you very much. I wrote this back in my college days. I hope it brings everyone who reads it a glimps at that love:-)
Anonymous
17th Sep 2017 3:58am
This is a lovely write...it brought me warm fuzzies and smiles and I always love those...
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
17th Sep 2017 4:53am
Giving beautiful women warm fuzzies and smiles is one of my main goals in life. So to hear that I succeeded brings a smile to my face. I am so very glad that you enjoyed it.
Anonymous
18th Sep 2017 4:55pm
There is such a "young love" feeling to this. The innocence, the longing. Beautiful
18th Sep 2017 7:54pm
It was a time of young love. A longing was in me. I think it was a case of me wishing something into existence. I have grown since then, but part of me still looks for that kind of love. I fear it could tear me apart, but maybe putting myself back together could be what I need.
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30th Sep 2017 1:31am
God... this love is so beautiful. I love seeing emotions like this. I've always been a lover and to see someone else who feels the same is so satisfying! the description was amazing too! "I feel an urge to hold you. You're the one I need..." if only someone needed me in this way. Beautifully written
Great write :)
Great write :)
30th Sep 2017 1:51am
I wrote this in college. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem. This is a love that has always warmed my heart, that yearning that is in each of us.
30th Sep 2017 1:52am
Very true. I haven't even reached college yet! I hope my writing will be that good by then! Lol
30th Sep 2017 1:57am
Your writing is good, you write from the heart. I have always thought that the key to good poetry is just that
30th Sep 2017 2:00am
Thank you! I noticed you RLed two of my poems!! Thank you so much! It means a lot to me.
8th Sep 2020 10:57am
Everything in me swooned while reading this. You write so beautifully, so much depth and feeling in how you express your emotions. Love, love, love this piece x
