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Soooo...I've been thinkin...'
If I never...
Wrote...
another word...
Oh, the silence
how it would
serendipitously stifle
Each vowel, coagulatin'
co-jointly twixt heart n' the soul...
Breathless, achin' to reach
the apex of "immutably
mute" resolve...
The simple sustenance
of mind's lyrical substance...
Gone...
Back to the beginnin...'
without light
If I were to...
not another
word write...
Wrote...
another word...
Oh, the silence
how it would
serendipitously stifle
Each vowel, coagulatin'
co-jointly twixt heart n' the soul...
Breathless, achin' to reach
the apex of "immutably
mute" resolve...
The simple sustenance
of mind's lyrical substance...
Gone...
Back to the beginnin...'
without light
If I were to...
not another
word write...
Published 14th Sep 2017
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14th Sep 2017 11:38am
14th Sep 2017 11:48am
Aaawww...my precious one...happy to hear that, n grateful as always for the support n RL add...#flattered!! :)
14th Sep 2017 1:27pm
14th Sep 2017 1:33pm
14th Sep 2017 2:59pm
14th Sep 2017 1:56pm
Introspective the thought,
poetic the expression
eloquent the presentation.
Well done words Poe
poetic the expression
eloquent the presentation.
Well done words Poe
14th Sep 2017 2:36pm
Thank you my dear, your comment is truly appreciated n I'm ever grateful for your support :)
14th Sep 2017 3:52pm
Dear Ric, let me guess, if you never wrote, then this world wouldn't be the same as it has to be....thank you for sharing your talent and I always enjoy reading your poems.
Love, RoseJasmine
Love, RoseJasmine
14th Sep 2017 4:13pm
14th Sep 2017 11:55pm
The world would not be the same. I always appreciate what you write. I'm a huge fan of your work. Please don't stop writing. But I get what you're saying. A great reflective piece. :)
15th Sep 2017 00:40am
Aaawww...Eswaller...I'm so thankful for your praise...truly, n deeply appreciate you! :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jan 2023 2:45pm
16th Sep 2017 11:27am
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16th Sep 2017 11:33am
Aaawww...Audio, you sweetie pie...blushingly I thank you greatly...truly n always appreciate your continued support. :)
16th Sep 2017 3:50pm
"Breathless, achin' to reach
the apex of "immutably
mute" resolve..."
Classic lines!
the apex of "immutably
mute" resolve..."
Classic lines!
16th Sep 2017 7:01pm
17th Sep 2017 1:29pm
"The simple sustenance
of mind's lyrical substance...
Gone...
Back to the beginnin...'
without light
If I were to...
not another
word write..."
Damn, if every writer hasn't felt like this at some point in time...I definitely have. But this is your gift. Continue to touch others with your words. You're actually great at it! 💋
of mind's lyrical substance...
Gone...
Back to the beginnin...'
without light
If I were to...
not another
word write..."
Damn, if every writer hasn't felt like this at some point in time...I definitely have. But this is your gift. Continue to touch others with your words. You're actually great at it! 💋
17th Sep 2017 1:33pm
Makes my heart smile to hear from you again...thank you sweetie, I shall try n maintain, although many times recently I've felt like giving it all up...
17th Sep 2017 1:41pm
That's what initially caused my break from DU. Sometimes I just feel like why bother. I understand love.
Anonymous
21st Sep 2017 5:02pm
Don't think too much dear, it's dangerous.
21st Sep 2017 7:12pm
Lol...too late, I've been in danger for a llllooooooonnnnggggg time lol...thank u sweetie...
Anonymous
- Edited 1st Oct 2017 11:01pm
1st Oct 2017 10:54pm
it's in your soul bruh
if not another word wrote
they'd remain as notes posted beneath your skin
itching with every move you make..
if not another word wrote
they'd remain as notes posted beneath your skin
itching with every move you make..
1st Oct 2017 10:57pm
I'll be damned if you ain't right bro...Yup...truly, thank you n give much love to you yours...
