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My Game
reversed
images
buried
beneath
composite
sketches
criminal
autopsy
slender
fingers
microscopic
smudge
trace
evidence
reveals
nothing
one
profile
unmatched
DNA
tainted
blood
compromises
evidence
corpses
scattered
makeshift
graveyard
hate
burning
sacred
earth
clever
predator
stalking
in shadow
innocence
raped
from the
vine
find me
if you can
a step
ahead
murder
my name
slaughter
my game
images
buried
beneath
composite
sketches
criminal
autopsy
slender
fingers
microscopic
smudge
trace
evidence
reveals
nothing
one
profile
unmatched
DNA
tainted
blood
compromises
evidence
corpses
scattered
makeshift
graveyard
hate
burning
sacred
earth
clever
predator
stalking
in shadow
innocence
raped
from the
vine
find me
if you can
a step
ahead
murder
my name
slaughter
my game
Published 12th Sep 2017
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12th Sep 2017 1:17am
Awesome! This poem has so much beneath it's surface layer Dave...I love it...and here I stand staring guiltily into my mirror.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
12th Sep 2017 1:46am
12th Sep 2017 4:49am
Murder is the game in this dark and clever write. Nice imagery and flow. Bravo poet.
16th Sep 2017 7:00pm
12th Sep 2017 1:12pm
16th Sep 2017 7:02pm
12th Sep 2017 9:34pm
"Murder my name, slaughter my game" damn Dave, this one has edge... Pure black Ink. Wonderful write my friend
- Fairy
- Fairy
16th Sep 2017 7:03pm
Fairy.. so glad you dig it.. i appreciate your kind words.. much appreciated.. Dave
14th Sep 2017 1:11am
16th Sep 2017 7:05pm
Mysterious.. much appreciated lovely one.. i appreciate your kind words.. love.. Dave
Anonymous
14th Sep 2017 10:03am
Great stuff!! Loved it man!! Very dark,very real!! Awesome job!!
16th Sep 2017 7:06pm
16th Sep 2017 7:08pm
"clever
predator
stalking
in shadow
innocence
raped
from the
vine"
damn it Dave this poem got me excited
you alone would understand why..
fucking fantastic write..
love you..
Brenda
predator
stalking
in shadow
innocence
raped
from the
vine"
damn it Dave this poem got me excited
you alone would understand why..
fucking fantastic write..
love you..
Brenda
16th Sep 2017 7:24pm
Brenda.. so glad you dig it, totally understand why.. i appreciate your kind words, and continued support.. honored to make your reading list.. love you, my sister.. Dave
Anonymous
16th Sep 2017 8:42pm
this is good
so good!!
so good!!
16th Sep 2017 8:49pm
Anonymous
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22nd Sep 2017 11:57pm
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