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rot gut
are you angry?
because I didn't tell you everything
each little detail of my past & present
I don't feel obliged to disclose my life story
you wanted my reality
i've shared some
it's been ugly & nasty
some beautiful victories
mostly beaten into the ground
just to brush the dust off
& walk on
i'm a fighter
I don't know how to lie down & quit
I'll go 12 rounds
with the monsters in my head
they're much more vicious
than the ones walking around
did you want reality lite?
sprinkled with fantasy
don't get mad at me now
if you can't handle white lightening
straight no chaser
yeah it's rot gut
but babe that's me
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Re. rot gut
Anonymous
7th Sep 2017 2:41pm
Beautiful Dark Angel, the monsters in our heads are always worse than those in front of us, aren't they? You are the strongest and most beautiful soul I know. You tell your truth with nothing to thin it. It may burn going down but it warms from within with the knowing. So very much love for you
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Re: Re. rot gut
7th Sep 2017 3:13pm
thank you lovely one yes they are.. they tear into us without mercy.. I deeply appreciate the love.. love you lady.. Crim
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7th Sep 2017 4:32pm
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7th Sep 2017 6:00pm
When the bottle opens it must be poured in sips otherwise we will become unconscious...great
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7th Sep 2017 10:53pm
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Anonymous
7th Sep 2017 6:55pm
My Beautiful Brenda, naked truths are the most lovely...some may think they can handle them all but not all can when they're placed before them...with people such a that, they should be counting their blessings you ever shared to begin with...you are so very precious
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
I love you fiercely
yours always & forever
xoxo Taryn
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Re: Re. rot gut
7th Sep 2017 10:54pm
thank you my love now you I know can handle your drink ;) you've sipped from me & loved me more for all my revelations.. I love you passionately.. Brenda
Re. rot gut
7th Sep 2017 7:09pm
I'll take the rot gut almost every time, white lightning honesty. It's a healthy shock to the system. You remain down-to-earth but somehow you still soar Lady Crim. Pour it on!
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7th Sep 2017 10:55pm
Re. rot gut
7th Sep 2017 7:45pm
In my experience most people who claim to want to know the truth usually really don't - Life is strange :-)
excellent write - lots of big Hugs :-)
excellent write - lots of big Hugs :-)
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Re: Re. rot gut
7th Sep 2017 10:55pm
thank you David yeah you're right I should have known better by now.. love & hugs Brenda
Re. rot gut
8th Sep 2017 11:12am
That title is raw, just like the woman...
Both have enough substance to keep
thinking person engaged...I love bring engaged... :)
Both have enough substance to keep
thinking person engaged...I love bring engaged... :)
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9th Sep 2017 2:19pm
Re. rot gut
8th Sep 2017 1:06pm
our private tragedies are not fodder for public consumption...
... some people don't know when to stop feeding
i feel this one
xo
... some people don't know when to stop feeding
i feel this one
xo
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Re: Re. rot gut
9th Sep 2017 2:21pm
thank you beautiful one for understanding we share our souls & still it's not enough sometimes.. love you lady.. Brenda
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10th Sep 2017 3:34pm
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Re. rot gut
Anonymous
11th Sep 2017 9:45pm
Brenda.. another one of your inks, that really needs music.. fucking powerful.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
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16th Sep 2017 7:46pm
Re. rot gut
Anonymous
14th Sep 2017 6:16pm
Ouch.
That white lightning
can be a gut rotter
if not filtered right;
something you`re
obviously not!
I`m offended by this poem
but then again
I understand the comparison.
You`re beautiful inside as well as out.
But because of those demons, it tends to show.
We are not at fault; we`re just built that way
whether a loved one wants to accept that or not.
A great poem, my Queen; it hits where it`s supposed to hurt,
or where it`s meant.
love to my Bren, Devlin
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16th Sep 2017 7:48pm
my beautiful Queen I would never want to offend you just my own personal demons raising their heads they are ugly & you're right white lightening needs a filter I love you dearly thank you for being here for me.. love Brenda
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Re: Re. rot gut
16th Sep 2017 7:49pm
thank you beautiful Daniella for showing me love on this write though it be a bit ugly.. love Brenda