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This Place
Sometimes I feel like I came to this place for someone else...
I don't think I was ever supposed to be here but my empathy ties me to this place.
I believe that one day I will leave this place...
...Maybe when my disinterest overtakes me or when I finally find that "bottom" part of rock bottom and fall through it to something better
I'm reaching for somewhere that does not exist in this place
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My place
Written and published by Nameless_Traveler -- Andrew Frans Robert Kerklaan
I don't think I was ever supposed to be here but my empathy ties me to this place.
I believe that one day I will leave this place...
...Maybe when my disinterest overtakes me or when I finally find that "bottom" part of rock bottom and fall through it to something better
I'm reaching for somewhere that does not exist in this place
--
My place
Written and published by Nameless_Traveler -- Andrew Frans Robert Kerklaan
Published 25th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
- Edited 25th Aug 2017 3:45am
25th Aug 2017 3:44am
I like your name and i like your poetry.
I do feel that you are watering yourself down for those here,
so Im asking why do we that to ourselves?
Is because we want to be understood or because we're afraid of what others may think of us?
I do feel that you are watering yourself down for those here,
so Im asking why do we that to ourselves?
Is because we want to be understood or because we're afraid of what others may think of us?
Anonymous
25th Aug 2017 11:19am
I think I learn empathy through reading poems- loved your poem.
25th Aug 2017 6:31pm
Thank you for hearing me And for sharing my pain. I cannot adequately express the gratitude I experience because of it
