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Shimmering Stars (I Didn't Want To Let Go)
shimmering stars in the sky
light up the night
as I held you so tight in my arms
I didn't wanna let go
the moment that I felt you
so close to my heart
but now I see
you turn and walk away
heaven has fallen
as the stars fall all around me
shimmering stars
turn to withering flame
falling from the sky
I'm left standing
here alone feeling so cold and afraid
who's gonna stop the tears
heaven has fallen
as the stars fall all around me
I didn't wanna let go
the moment that I felt you
so close to my heart
light up the night
as I held you so tight in my arms
I didn't wanna let go
the moment that I felt you
so close to my heart
but now I see
you turn and walk away
heaven has fallen
as the stars fall all around me
shimmering stars
turn to withering flame
falling from the sky
I'm left standing
here alone feeling so cold and afraid
who's gonna stop the tears
heaven has fallen
as the stars fall all around me
I didn't wanna let go
the moment that I felt you
so close to my heart
Published 18th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
18th Aug 2017 11:33pm
Such a gentle and moving love poem. It could quite easily be transferred to music I feel; maybe sung on an acoustic guitar.
I like the use of repetition also. It is quite intense, moving and sad. Well done. A real keeper.
I like the use of repetition also. It is quite intense, moving and sad. Well done. A real keeper.
18th Aug 2017 11:45pm
Anonymous
- Edited 18th Aug 2017 11:57pm
18th Aug 2017 11:55pm
Yes, that doesn't surprise me actually. You can usually tell real poems apart because you can feel or / and relate to them. :-)
18th Aug 2017 11:38pm
