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Within the pigment of my imagination...
You are...
My desire
My fire
My ride
or die...
You are
The subsequent
tears
in my eye
The passion
I cry
That moment
of peace
The two of us,
one piece...
You are
My deviant ,
my crave...
for you
I'm love's slave
You are my angel,
that high;
to which I rise...
my life, in this life
til the very day I die...
Published 9th Aug 2017
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9th Aug 2017 3:05pm
The pigments within this write reflect such magnificent hues of the colors of love.
I enjoyed this write very much, for you paint such imagery with your words.
I enjoyed this write very much, for you paint such imagery with your words.
10th Aug 2017 00:16am
9th Aug 2017 3:46pm
Oh ... brushing the dew away from eyes ... splendid write my dear sweet poet ...
10th Aug 2017 00:18am
9th Aug 2017 4:14pm
This, made me smile as I read it. It gives off a hint of sorrow (to me at least). It has many sides to it, the dark and the light side of love.
10th Aug 2017 00:22am
Thank you...I'm honored by your thoughts n time only ink...appreciate it truly :)
9th Aug 2017 4:28pm
Such beauty in the bittersweet lines. Felt the pain behind this one.
Love
V
Love
V
10th Aug 2017 00:29am
I'd like to think you definitely know a Lil some thin bout those bittersweet memories based on all I've read of yours....thank u so much sweet Goddess...I'm greatly honored .... :)
10th Aug 2017 6:50pm
I know them all to well. What binds me to exile in terms of love. Your very welcome sweetness! Xoxoxo V
9th Aug 2017 6:06pm
Great! I really like this one- you kinda got me with "my life, in this life, til the very day I die". Wonderful!
10th Aug 2017 1:41am
Well I'm very happy I finally wrote one u really like! Lol...truly though, I'm grateful for ur support my dear :)
10th Aug 2017 2:02am
You know I really like your writing. Sometimes though a poem or a song just gets to you and it stays with you- and this is one of those for me. so Thank You Poetikmind.
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9th Aug 2017 8:53pm
Your pen bleeds beauty here. Truly
10th Aug 2017 4:31am
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10th Aug 2017 1:27pm
you had me @
ride or die
shiiiiit papi
this is how love poems should be written
ride or die
shiiiiit papi
this is how love poems should be written
10th Aug 2017 1:43pm
Well U know how I feel, n what I'd say if I thought I had any hope... :)...thank you mami, I'm deeply n forever grateful.... :)
11th Aug 2017 5:14pm
I fear this kind of feeling. It's like loosing one's self because of love. I hope to never be in this state.
11th Aug 2017 7:47pm
Bein in love requires bein fearless...based on what you said, you have nothing to fear. I think that's sad though, because although I can't claim any current great love, I have felt it n it's exhilarating...thank you for ur thoughts I appreciate them.
11th Aug 2017 9:26pm
Awww, how sweet was this...... It's a beautiful thing when someone can ignite all those passionate feelings within you, whether it be past or present..... Beautifully expressed my friend..... You already know....
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
12th Aug 2017 12:21pm
It's definitely based on wwaaaaaayyyy back in the past sadly. But hey, I'm happy you liked my sweetness...thank you, I'm grateful as always for your continued support :)
14th Aug 2017 4:41pm
Hey poetry doesn't always have to be about what is going on in this present moment, it is still relevant though and memories can be triggered no matter the time that has past..... Nice nonetheless...... ~BSavvy
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12th Aug 2017 12:27pm
Wow...I'm stunned to hear from you again! I'm happy though, n I'm grateful for your return n your sweet thoughts thank you so much sweetheart. :)
13th Aug 2017 6:28pm
13th Aug 2017 6:41pm
Thank you...there are times when I get wordy, but I honestly don't feel the need to sound complicated, just because I can lol...Anywho, thank you so much for ur time n thoughts, I appreciate it much.
17th Aug 2017 5:50am
Hey poetikmind it long while since I've read one of your poems. It's nice to you have not lost your touch. Every word just flow's perfectly. Great ink .
17th Aug 2017 11:40am
Hey bro. Thanks, I'm happy to have a visit no matter how long it's been ... appreciate your support truly. :)
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21st Sep 2017 6:28pm
Thank you, I'm honored that you do n I'm very grateful for the RL add too... :)
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3rd Oct 2017 8:40am
Ur welcome it's the most beautiful thing I have ever read besides wat u sent me
5th Oct 2017 2:33am
So beautiful. This write stirred many of my emotions. Past and present.
My hope is for everyone to experience this type of passion at least once in their lifetime.
I truly enjoyed, thank you :)
My hope is for everyone to experience this type of passion at least once in their lifetime.
I truly enjoyed, thank you :)
5th Oct 2017 2:53am
Yea that's a great thing to hope for n it shows how amazing ur heart is too...thank you my sweetheart, I'm humbled n grateful always :)
