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I, Tourniquet...
Alas, for her broken soul
thy stem, of the bloodshed
attempt to repair whole...
Bandage of fragile part
wrapped in security
assured thee, thou
shall protect thine heart
Profusion staid his confusion
doesth she query this
aid-protrusion?
Nay, for thee today
remnants of a past soul's decline
shines gratuitous light
back into this broken hole
of mine...
Published 7th Aug 2017
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7th Aug 2017 9:59pm
7th Aug 2017 10:01pm
Such a flatterer my dear, but I'm deeply grateful, n as always appreciate you bunches... :)
7th Aug 2017 11:45pm
8th Aug 2017 1:17am
Aaawww...lov u too... n thank u tons for the continued support ...it's greatly appreciated :)
8th Aug 2017 4:28am
Speechlessly beautiful. Words that we all desire to hear and even more so experience. Xx
8th Aug 2017 10:30am
Aaaaawww...I'm super happy to hear from you! N thank u so much Issy... appreciate you always :)
8th Aug 2017 7:01am
Connection
Unconditional
Intertwined
regardless of time and space
Beauty the poem
Unconditional
Intertwined
regardless of time and space
Beauty the poem
8th Aug 2017 10:36am
how sweet you are my friend... I'm grateful for the visit n thoughts n deeply appreciate the support :)
8th Aug 2017 12:26pm
8th Aug 2017 12:46pm
Well my friend I've never read a comment from you that didn't make me smile, n this one gave me a very big one soooooo...as always I'm honored n thank you much...appreciate you always! :)
8th Aug 2017 5:41pm
8th Aug 2017 6:52pm
Gosh...You're too kind bro. But I'm gratefully accepting your praise! Lol appreciate u kid...
11th Aug 2017 6:28am
"Nay, for thee today
remnants of a past soul's decline
shines gratuitous light
back into this broken hole
of mine... "....this stanza is great...love it.....reversal of the soul light...awesome...
remnants of a past soul's decline
shines gratuitous light
back into this broken hole
of mine... "....this stanza is great...love it.....reversal of the soul light...awesome...
11th Aug 2017 10:04am
Gosh...such a wonderful compliment...I thank you kindly n truly appreciate the thoughts n time spent on my page. :)
11th Aug 2017 10:29pm
There you go again with that pen of yours.... You went smooth in the classic direction lol... Love it.
~BSavvy
~BSavvy
12th Aug 2017 11:05am
Had to try n be smooth, as the original "smoove one" :)...thank you my dearest sweet lady, ever smoove...on my heart. :)
13th Aug 2017 6:33pm
13th Aug 2017 6:46pm
Thanks...appreciate your again visiting n commenting...but 1 question though, who's Lady P?
13th Aug 2017 7:26pm
U know what? Something told me tht u might not be a girl....ur not are u? If ur not sorry didnt realize
