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Bereft Of Myths
I am Sea, he claims
I am Earth, says she
He says, I am Fire
She claims, I am Wind
We are Eternal, they sing
I know I am plywood,
drywall, cement and asphalt,
surface on surface,
extending my neck patiently
for the DEMOLITION sign to be hanged on...
I am Earth, says she
He says, I am Fire
She claims, I am Wind
We are Eternal, they sing
I know I am plywood,
drywall, cement and asphalt,
surface on surface,
extending my neck patiently
for the DEMOLITION sign to be hanged on...
Published 8th Aug 2017
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9th Aug 2017 5:33am
13th Aug 2017 3:30pm
Sounds like an arrogant humans folly, thinking they're legendary and invincible, able to control the whole world including nature's elements. Enjoyed it a lot!
14th Aug 2017 00:36am
Thank you for commenting. Recognizing how relative our significance as a species is, perhaps will result to a little more humility.
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 9:11pm
There's nothing like having those inner attires and walls torn away.
sometimes pleasant and other's not, tis a scary adventure overall..
that mind of yours is a glorious thing!
sometimes pleasant and other's not, tis a scary adventure overall..
that mind of yours is a glorious thing!
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2017 9:54pm
Beautifully precise.
6th Dec 2018 11:53pm
That ending is brutal but powerful. Wow, nicely done, takis!
Thanks for participating in my competition!
Thanks for participating in my competition!
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15th Jul 2019 2:54am
"surface on surface"
loved that. definitely "solidifies" how we are solid yet breakable
loved that. definitely "solidifies" how we are solid yet breakable
4th Apr 2020 7:44pm
Humility versus arrogance. The intent on comparing yourself to what's man made instead of nature which is of more divine work. What is man made can be broken down by man and rebuilt better unlike natural elements.
