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Who's Really to Blame?
Take what has been given
It is yours
I am the damned fool
Without a heart
It is yours
I am the damned fool
Without a heart
Published 8th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
8th Aug 2017 8:37pm
You didn't need a lot of words to convey the pain in this one, Zach. Never a fool to love. Sure hurts when you're left in it alone though.
8th Aug 2017 9:34pm
Never a fool to love. Only a fool to not understand the risk. Thanks Ash.
Anonymous
10th Aug 2017 3:30am
Annnnnnd to this one Zach....I say "eeeeesh".....risk...yes...one can sometimes end up questioning that little bitch
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
26th Dec 2017 4:22am
We were all created out of love...
Created to love and to be loved. Without it life itself would be without meaning. So, to not love or risk the chance of not being loved in return would be foolish. You my friend are not a fool at all.
Created to love and to be loved. Without it life itself would be without meaning. So, to not love or risk the chance of not being loved in return would be foolish. You my friend are not a fool at all.
