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OMNILIGHT
So far from home
Balanced between twin suns and wonder
And the gravity holding me
Yet pulling me asunder
And an omnilight
Like liberty
Like the parakeets of west London
Or a statue in the sea
Touched by a sun's caress
Brighter than a greatness
Is goodness
Brighter than goodness
Is a kindness
Fierce as suns' caress
Balanced between twin suns and wonder
And the gravity holding me
Yet pulling me asunder
And an omnilight
Like liberty
Like the parakeets of west London
Or a statue in the sea
Touched by a sun's caress
Brighter than a greatness
Is goodness
Brighter than goodness
Is a kindness
Fierce as suns' caress
Published 5th Aug 2017
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6th Aug 2017 00:05am
6th Aug 2017 11:03am
Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 9:10pm
dear whale, this piece is full of thoughtfulness and heart capturing.
it's so achingly beautiful and full of hope.
i can feel the tendrils emanating from this, they are delicately
welcomed.
Youre such a lovely rare soul
it's so achingly beautiful and full of hope.
i can feel the tendrils emanating from this, they are delicately
welcomed.
Youre such a lovely rare soul
7th Aug 2017 6:11am
Anonymous
6th Aug 2017 10:24pm
I pull oracle cards once a week as a focus (I use the Druid animal oracle produced by Phillip Carr-Gomm) and today I got The Bee - a card reminding me to celebrate the moment and turn my face to the work and never ending sustenance of the sun.
Funny I should read this straight after my card was pulled. So beautifully expressed also. Lovely read, Whale. Thank you for sharing.
Funny I should read this straight after my card was pulled. So beautifully expressed also. Lovely read, Whale. Thank you for sharing.
7th Aug 2017 6:13am
So true Missy 💫How can we moan about what we have or have not - with all the sun has given freely
7th Aug 2017 4:59am
WOW, what fantastic ink!
"Brighter than a greatness
Is goodness
Brighter than goodness
Is a kindness
Fierce as suns' caress"
You killed it with that ending.
Respect!
<3
"Brighter than a greatness
Is goodness
Brighter than goodness
Is a kindness
Fierce as suns' caress"
You killed it with that ending.
Respect!
<3
7th Aug 2017 6:13am
