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lotus walls
i ache tonight
little girl lost
in a forest of seduction
you call to me in spirit
i feel you
pulling at my inner most being
with caresses sent on the wind
i answer back
ride you in the morning hours
you enter my soul
as you sleep
we've known each other
i feel it
an ancient lover
hieroglyphics
on my lotus walls
mark me as your own
my King i will exalt you
bend down & weep at your feet
for a love i thought lost
in the last world
I've found in this one
tragic lovers
who died for love
my magic is pure
i cast it on the ether waves
so that it reach your shores
with sweet incense
i conjure women to your bed
that your desires be fulfilled
bury your need deep inside
& know that i feel you cum
as you succumb to another
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 5th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 4:18am
My Beautiful Brenda...the imagery which was brought to me with these lines were breathtakingly majestic...
"an ancient lover
hieroglyphics
on my lotus walls
mark me as your own
my King i will exalt you
bend down & weep at your feet"
~ there is such power in all your naked beautiful truths
I love you passionately my love
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
"an ancient lover
hieroglyphics
on my lotus walls
mark me as your own
my King i will exalt you
bend down & weep at your feet"
~ there is such power in all your naked beautiful truths
I love you passionately my love
With all my love - Taryn xoxo
7th Aug 2017 2:34pm
thank you my love for understanding & showing me love on this write.. I love you madly.. love Brenda
Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 4:50am
Brenda.. only you could create this.. simply brilliant, and lusciously divine.. love you, my sister..
Dave
Dave
7th Aug 2017 2:35pm
this resonates today... i've been slow grinding the breeze of another's lust for a few weeks now.... fucking him vicariously... ltm
this is a gorgeously sensual write, darling brenda, i've just reread the previous one & there's a deeper sense of emotion here
love it
xo
this is a gorgeously sensual write, darling brenda, i've just reread the previous one & there's a deeper sense of emotion here
love it
xo
7th Aug 2017 2:37pm
thank you graciously beautiful one giggling to myself at you fucking him vicariously yes you are correct in interpreting this one to be deeper in emotion.. love you lady.. Brenda
Anonymous
5th Aug 2017 2:21pm
Crim so much sensuality in this.
Desire rises from this read.
Desire rises from this read.
7th Aug 2017 2:37pm
5th Aug 2017 5:24pm
Oh man, this is so damn sexy
Geez Crim
"with caresses sent on the wind
i answer back
ride you in the morning hours"
"with sweet incense
i conjure women to your bed
that your desires be fulfilled
bury your need deep inside
& know that i feel you cum
as you succumb to another"
Damn that is a harsh and sexy closer damn that's brutally beautiful 🌹🌟👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Great fucken write
Geez Crim
"with caresses sent on the wind
i answer back
ride you in the morning hours"
"with sweet incense
i conjure women to your bed
that your desires be fulfilled
bury your need deep inside
& know that i feel you cum
as you succumb to another"
Damn that is a harsh and sexy closer damn that's brutally beautiful 🌹🌟👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
Great fucken write
7th Aug 2017 2:38pm
aw thank you graciously dearest Quiet One I absolutely loved your comment :) love Crim
5th Aug 2017 8:26pm
A stunning write Lady Crim, particularly the end. The pleasure might be your own, and well deserved. Love this!
7th Aug 2017 2:39pm
6th Aug 2017 1:58pm
"with caresses sent on the wind
i answer back
ride you in the morning hours"
"bury your need deep inside
& know that i feel you cum
as you succumb to another "
these are just two of the amazing stanzas from your out of this world poetry.rich,vibrant,and you have my desires on their knees.you bled a piece of you to read and we drank it up with every last drop.well penned,keep'em coming Crimsin.
i answer back
ride you in the morning hours"
"bury your need deep inside
& know that i feel you cum
as you succumb to another "
these are just two of the amazing stanzas from your out of this world poetry.rich,vibrant,and you have my desires on their knees.you bled a piece of you to read and we drank it up with every last drop.well penned,keep'em coming Crimsin.
7th Aug 2017 2:40pm
aw thank you graciously for such an awesome comment & welcome to DU :) love Crimsin
6th Aug 2017 3:04pm
you never fail to deliver - such a hot and sensual write, with a bot of a twist :-)
I really enjoyed this :-)
I really enjoyed this :-)
7th Aug 2017 2:40pm
7th Aug 2017 5:41am
ancient lovers, Crim,
when it's that strong
they seek each other out over the centuries...
when it's that strong
they seek each other out over the centuries...
7th Aug 2017 2:41pm
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 5:04pm
"an ancient lover
hieroglyphics
on my lotus walls
mark me as your own"
Oh my beautiful Dark Angel, those words are beyond breathtaking in their beauty and ancient recognition. You have brought tears to my eyes with this beautiful poem. I will be holding this one close.
So much love for you...
hieroglyphics
on my lotus walls
mark me as your own"
Oh my beautiful Dark Angel, those words are beyond breathtaking in their beauty and ancient recognition. You have brought tears to my eyes with this beautiful poem. I will be holding this one close.
So much love for you...
7th Aug 2017 6:07pm
thank you lovely one such joy you've brought me today with the love you've shown me & this write.. love you lady.. Crim
20th Aug 2017 3:34am
20th Aug 2017 2:00pm
