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a deities note
a deity in the flesh
belonging to no one
i flex & supernovas are born
at war with the tyrant of this realm
who claims to be god of cock
he fucks my black holes
shoots his Sadistic sin inside
he thinks no one sees
i see with eyes
not known to mortal man
he is derelict
& i know where he hides
i stretch over eons of time
in a rage i shake
holding my temper
for fear the release
would be my own unraveling
there is an appointed time
he will hang on his own word
come with me into the void
witness there are eyes
that record all
on a molecular level
space is alive
in all the universes
i exist
you taste me on the wind
feel me in the flesh
& know that i am
Copyright © 2017 Crimsin. All Rights Reserved
Published 7th Aug 2017
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Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 12:55pm
Constant amazement at your writing!
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7th Aug 2017 3:16pm
Riveting poetry, Brenda. I was capivated from the first line to that very dramatic last one
7th Aug 2017 3:26pm
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 5:08pm
My beautiful Dark Angel, I love it when you take us on these journeys. You bring to life imagery that astounds and your words are captivating and gorgeous. You are so amazing in your writing and in spirit.
So much love for you...
So much love for you...
7th Aug 2017 6:15pm
thank you lovely one for going on this journey with me your beautiful comment gifted me with smiles :) love Crim
Anonymous
7th Aug 2017 5:13pm
Sweetly superb
"in all the universes
i exist
you taste me on the wind
feel me in the flesh
& know that i am"
Yeah stay concurrent
"in all the universes
i exist
you taste me on the wind
feel me in the flesh
& know that i am"
Yeah stay concurrent
7th Aug 2017 6:16pm
7th Aug 2017 9:40pm
simply fantastic, I enjoyed every single word :-)
"in a rage i shake
holding my temper
for fear the release
would be my own unraveling."
Man did I really feel this stanza - great write :-) Big HUGS :-)
"in a rage i shake
holding my temper
for fear the release
would be my own unraveling."
Man did I really feel this stanza - great write :-) Big HUGS :-)
8th Aug 2017 1:20am
8th Aug 2017 2:11am
Brenda.. so filled with power.. and your soul.. so reading list worthy.. wish i had room.. always in awe of your brilliance.. my sister, you inspire me.. i love you across galaxies, and beyond..
Dave
Dave
9th Aug 2017 2:44am
aw thank you Dave for the love you've shown me on this write.. knowing you wanted to add is more than enough :) love you my brother.. Brenda
