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Spank The Monkey
You can spank the monkey if you like
You can spank him as often as desired
Always best with an open handed spank
Anything else would be positively uncouth
As for the monkey on your back
He is impossible to reach and spank
An open handed spank will not work
Only an open and positive mind
Can spank that kind of monkey
Published 30th Jul 2017
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30th Jul 2017 8:27am
i love how you mix profundity & humor here.
i feed the monkey on my back.. the bitch loves chocolate
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i feed the monkey on my back.. the bitch loves chocolate
x
31st Jul 2017 3:38pm
*LMMO - damn you made me *Laugh My Monkey Off (lol) So now I am thinking of extending this poem to laughing my monkey off or tempting it with chocolate :-) Thank you for the smiles today :-)
Anonymous
30th Jul 2017 11:51am
Nice !!
31st Jul 2017 3:39pm
30th Jul 2017 2:36pm
Only an open and positive mind
Can spank that kind of monkey
Love & Intellect are EVERYTHING!
Gotta agree with Katja about the chocolate!
Can spank that kind of monkey
Love & Intellect are EVERYTHING!
Gotta agree with Katja about the chocolate!
31st Jul 2017 3:40pm
30th Jul 2017 4:37pm
A most clever blending of wit and wisdom, my friend! :)
And yes..the strength, and power of hope and positive thinking!
And yes..the strength, and power of hope and positive thinking!
31st Jul 2017 3:42pm
when strength, power and hope get together there is almost no stopping them :-) thank you for the read and comments :-) Hugs :-)
30th Jul 2017 8:42pm
positively uncouth indeed David!!! Stop monkeying around! I must have channeled this while writing my latest...
Too funny!
JJ
Too funny!
JJ
31st Jul 2017 3:44pm
I'll leave uncouth to the youth! :-) thank you my friend I am glad you enjoyed it :-)
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 12:27pm
In reading this I often wonder just how many of us have that monkey draped across out back? Persistent little bitch...I enjoyed this David!
xoxo Taryn
xoxo Taryn
31st Jul 2017 3:46pm
the monkeys are always there but they do vary in size :-) I am glad you enjoyed this wee one :-) - Hugs :-)
Anonymous
31st Jul 2017 2:12pm
You made me smile right up to those last 2 lines. And then I felt the light bulb flick on. Brilliant use of humor and truth.
31st Jul 2017 3:47pm
thank you so much - I am thankful for your read, comments and understanding :-) Hugs :-)
