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The Rose
The rose arose
It now grows
Where body lay
In slow decay
Red as flame
Red as blood
They rot
In vile mud
Death and rebirth
From the earth
The life disposed
Where the rose
grows.
It now grows
Where body lay
In slow decay
Red as flame
Red as blood
They rot
In vile mud
Death and rebirth
From the earth
The life disposed
Where the rose
grows.
Published 29th Jul 2017
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29th Jul 2017 11:26am
29th Jul 2017 10:42pm
It is indeed, it's lasts but a moment and we're gone. Thank you for taking the time to read and leave your thoughts.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
29th Jul 2017 12:40pm
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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I thank you for those kind words, my friend, I appreciate it very much^_^
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
29th Jul 2017 3:34pm
cold, I thank you, for reading me and for the kind words, I appreciate it very much. I'm glad you found it's depths.
~anonshadow
~anonshadow
Anonymous
30th Jul 2017 3:41am
Hey A........this is a brilliant ink.........very thought provoking........I can relate to this.......at times I feel like a dying rose.........enjoyed.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
30th Jul 2017 4:50am
Thank you very much for those kind words, they are appreciated. Very glad you could relate:) ~anonshadow
2nd Aug 2017 9:41am
Nice usage of metaphors. Also, I particularly like how short the lines are whilst still able to create a good impact on the imagination. Well done :)
3rd Aug 2017 8:41am
Thank you very much for those kind words, I truly appreciate it. Very happy to see you stop by! ~anonshadow
