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Orange, Red & Brown
A Man's Caliber
cannot be measured
by his shirt size;
large flannel sleeves
Orande, Red, and Brown
rolled loosely, dangling
about her olive forearms
The long tail becoming
a gown to make morning
tea & coffee, a buttery
pancake brunch in bed;
her ballet socks
gliding across tile
to clean house on a
Saturday afternoon
It's a second skin
of scent every woman
becomes familiar with
while lounging through
the yearning absence
or playful attendance
of the man she Loves
Calibur is measured
by his Spiritual intent
His steadfast leadership;
her best interest at Heart
It's an unfailing sense
of justice penetrating
an exact depth of presence;
a vulnerable exposure
renting the veil of fear
and doubt within her before
Evolutionary Union occurs:
A transmogrification
from Absolute Belief;
a Holy Commununion
between Love and Truth
Born only of Dreams
and their Patient Faith.
~
cannot be measured
by his shirt size;
large flannel sleeves
Orande, Red, and Brown
rolled loosely, dangling
about her olive forearms
The long tail becoming
a gown to make morning
tea & coffee, a buttery
pancake brunch in bed;
her ballet socks
gliding across tile
to clean house on a
Saturday afternoon
It's a second skin
of scent every woman
becomes familiar with
while lounging through
the yearning absence
or playful attendance
of the man she Loves
Calibur is measured
by his Spiritual intent
His steadfast leadership;
her best interest at Heart
It's an unfailing sense
of justice penetrating
an exact depth of presence;
a vulnerable exposure
renting the veil of fear
and doubt within her before
Evolutionary Union occurs:
A transmogrification
from Absolute Belief;
a Holy Commununion
between Love and Truth
Born only of Dreams
and their Patient Faith.
~
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Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 1:08am
I know americans can't spell calibre,
but shouldn't 'unflailing' be 'unfailing'
or should I be whipped for even
suggesting .. ? :)
but shouldn't 'unflailing' be 'unfailing'
or should I be whipped for even
suggesting .. ? :)
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
Oh GOD you remind me of those insanely embarrassing American spelling bees after moving from England! I'll meet you half way! I'll give you unfailing ( though I have to give that word choice a second thought ), but I'm keepin' caliber!
Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 1:34am
of course you're keeping caliber,
you yanks always stick to your guns .. !
(just joking, honest !)
you yanks always stick to your guns .. !
(just joking, honest !)
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 1:39am
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a wild one, eh ..
"what are you rebelling against.."
"what have you got .." :)
"what are you rebelling against.."
"what have you got .." :)
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 1:58am
Oh sheesh! I'm thinking of the Canadian independence day commercial. . . what have I got?! Lemme tell ya!
Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 1:49am
AND "rent" i surmise meant 'rend'......but so what?
Blezz ye, dear.
Blezz ye, dear.
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
No! Ha! It's a biblical reference. He RENT his clothing, or in this case the veil of her doubt.
I have no idea where my Capt'n is! He's typically *cough sputtering cough * my errors ! He's probably in the beach drinking rum!
I have no idea where my Capt'n is! He's typically *cough sputtering cough * my errors ! He's probably in the beach drinking rum!
Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
of course, there's some terrible english
in the bible.
I sometimes think they couldn't
even speak it ..
although, yes, you're right .. :)
in the bible.
I sometimes think they couldn't
even speak it ..
although, yes, you're right .. :)
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
From whither dost thou gettest thy information?!
Except for the part about me being right, oh course!
Except for the part about me being right, oh course!
Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
Anonymous
- Edited 24th Jul 2017 2:13am
24th Jul 2017 2:05am
He just stumbled upon the Lady in Flannel and is admiring the view.
A delightful treat for the senses.
A delightful treat for the senses.
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24th Jul 2017 2:07am
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Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 2:10am
you have such a special way with words, such beauty. It is so easy to get lost in your poetry. That is a real gift
Thank you for this one :-)
Thank you for this one :-)
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24th Jul 2017 2:14am
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24th Jul 2017 7:18am
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24th Jul 2017 12:07pm
Re. Orange, Red & Brown
24th Jul 2017 9:25am
she always looks good in an oversized shirt,
probably why he bought it...
probably why he bought it...
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24th Jul 2017 12:08pm
Re. Orange, Red & Brown
25th Jul 2017 2:47am
This was such a beautiful piece,
I can only hope to one day be a lil like this man you speak of...
I can only hope to one day be a lil like this man you speak of...
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Re: Re. Orange, Red & Brown
25th Jul 2017 11:49am
Aww. Thank you, PoeticOne. That is so sweet. You are ALREADY like him in many ways. You're kind, supportive, talented, and compassionate. You're also very much appreciated. 🌞
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25th Jul 2017 12:43pm
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Anonymous
25th Jul 2017 11:45pm
Wheew!! caught me completely off guard, you're getting good at doing that to me, my dearest Vati!
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26th Jul 2017 2:36am
Re. Orange, Red & Brown
28th Jul 2017 2:52pm
"Born only of Dreams"
You're so good with words.
Thanks for the beautiful ride Ahavati.
You're so good with words.
Thanks for the beautiful ride Ahavati.
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28th Jul 2017 2:55pm
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2017 6:10pm
to beautiful for words.
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2nd Sep 2017 6:12pm
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2017 6:17pm
Special :)
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