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Bathed
I bathed
in his
auric field
until
I became
immersed
in the
bliss
we channeled
towards
one
another
as we
kissed
deeply
and
passionately
in the
wild.
in his
auric field
until
I became
immersed
in the
bliss
we channeled
towards
one
another
as we
kissed
deeply
and
passionately
in the
wild.
Published 23rd Jul 2017
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Anonymous
23rd Jul 2017 12:05pm
Water is running.... mind if I join ?
23rd Jul 2017 6:43pm
24th Jul 2017 6:29am
Poem made more sense to me when I could see the pic properly (I had to use magnifying glass with my specs on - only then did I see the woman's head kissing him). Like the use of metaphors for being in water.
Seriously tho this sounds like the vocab of a woman a college woman not jus some girl
16th Sep 2019 2:40pm
